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Appearance: As is to be expected from the name "fairy", the fairies are humanoid in appearance of varying shapes and sizes. Generally fairies take up the appearance of a young, attractive, human woman with long, elven ears. At least, their default appearance is such. In reality, their appearance varies so much that they can take on the appearance of any sapient, dominant race of a planet. Generally, they are found in humanoid form with alterations in skin color or wing structure. Fairies have different kinds of insectoid wings that don't seem based on genetics- it's almost as if they choose their wings at birth unconsciously. Dragonfly-winged fairies tend to be the fastest but most frail, butterfly-winged fairies are the slowest but have the most magical power, moth-winged fairies have the best perception and adaptability, and beetle-winged fairies are the most durable and physically strongest. Fairies stand between 3 inches tall and upwards of 4 feet in height, though larger fairies are cumbersome in flight due to their massive size.
Background: Fairies as a whole are the spirits of the wild made corporeal. The unusual, the unknown, the unexpected aspects of nature that humans cannot explain or do not comprehend. And yet fairies are one of the oldest races in the universe, so widely spread they even exist on other planets. This is due to the species having the amazing ability to appeal to other races by changing into what is most familiar to the dominate life form. Either due to genre savviness or whimsical chance, all fairies that aren't inherently evil either look like attractive human women, handsome adult men, or adorable children with the idea being that they are less likely to be killed on sight if they are cute or attractive. This survival tactic is shared by all fairies, even on other planets.
While both good and evil fey exist, it isn't accurate to claim they're one or the other. Rather, their minds are inconceivable. They think and act differently than other races would. As such, even minor gifts like food or clothing would be met with hostility or permanent infatuation, and it's not unheard of for powerful fey to wipe entire farms off the map for misremembering their name. Each fairy is different in what they like or dislike so it's almost impossible to determine whether an action will anger or flatter them.
While fairies are almost always feminine in appearance it is not correct to refer to one as "male" or "female". Fairies have no genders, or at least not in the conventional sense that we understand. They merely identify with the gender of their choice at birth unconsciously. What they find attractive wildly varies as well, and something as asinine as loving a person's couch is enough reason to get fairy to fall for a human. Their love or romance with other creatures (fairies included) is extremely PG. In fact, fairy reproduction sounds like something from a child's storybook. Simply cuddling with a person (fairy or otherwise) that they adore has a chance to create a new fairy out of nowhere, appearing as an egg in the arms of one of the partners the morning after. The egg doesn't hatch, rather it slowly molds its form to take the shape of a fairy before said fairy comes to life and is considered "born". Fairies are born as their final appearance and do not change appearance over the course of their life. No one knows exactly how long a fairy can live due to most being eaten a few years into their lives by wild animals. It should be noted that saving a fairy being attacked by an animal is a surefire way to earn their friendship, even love. It's not unheard of for interspecies romance between fairies and humans. Fairies enjoy the time they spent with their human partner but almost immediately forget about them after the human's natural death. While lasting impressions can be made most fairies live in the moment, and if their loved one isn't in that moment they're uninterested. Yet, acquiring a fairy significant other is considered lucky as they are fiercely loyal to their partner and do what they can to bless them and their craft.
Fairy technology is primitive, to be blunt. Although they craft tiny weapons like metal swords or staves, rarely are electrical equipment incorporated into their lives. The idea of modern technology is not unheard of but most are unfamiliar with them and can subsequently become addicted to their usage because they simply don't know how they're supposed to behave around such things. It's not unheard of for a fairy to never leave an active television until it's forcefully turned off because there is always something to watch (as televisions never go off the air) or for a fairy to become too heavy to even fly due to overeating, since there is always something to eat. Fairies are, however, experts at all things arcane and instead incorporate magitechnology into their lives. Fairy tribes are small and far away from human settlements. They don't have much physical contact with other villages but are capable of communicating using magical leylines the same way we would use phones.
Fairies have a simple belief system. Every star in the sky is a fairy that at some point in their life done something rememberable before they died. The ones who never achieved this become grains of sand on the beach to be washed away and forgotten. As such, every fairy ironically yearn to be remembered by the people they easily forget about. The contradictory behavior has made many believe why there are so many grains of sand as opposed to stars in the night sky- Too many fairies forget their goals in life and flounder in their eternally youthful existence before meeting an untimely death.
Unique Characteristics:
Magic Beings: One of the biggest traits of the fey is that they do not have or use ki. Rather, they use magic, called mana, which is the life force of the planet itself rather than the energy in their own bodies. They call upon the life force of the earth and weave the gathered mana into spells to cast. Their control of magic is not a natural thing but rather a learned ability that comes more naturally to them as they learn more and more spells. Their spells rarely require verbal components but almost always require somatic (hand movements) components to cast and can be interrupted if attacked during the casting. Every magic-user has a limited pool of mana that slowly regenerates over time but becoming tapped for power causes horrible migraines and makes it impossible to use magic until their pool is full enough. It's almost unheard of for a fairy to be born with no magical control. Due to the nature of their abilities fairies are not detected the same way as ki users. Ki sense cannot pick up anything beyond 10,000 PL on fairies as beyond that they all feel the same. Scouters, however, can still get a good read on them as nowadays models are adapted to the weird form of power.
Natural Flight: All fairies know how to fly from the moment they're born and only improve their control as they grow older. They're capable of hovering in mid air and changing directions much like actual insects, but the speed of such is determined by their wing shape (with dragonfly wings having the absolute most control and speed and beetle wings having almost no control and little speed). Most fairies are capable of flying 30 miles an hour and only become faster the more practice they have flying. Particularly large fairies are more clumsy in the air. All fairies begin play with [PT-1] Flight
Transformations:
Few fairies, if any, have been able to acquire a transformation on par with the best in the universe. This has less to do with the race not having one and more with having a fairy alive capable of such a transformation. There are currently two types of transformations for fairies- Forced and Colored.
Forced Transformation: Forced transformations are just that- forced. They're quick bursts of power that draw on the fairy's life force to use with a risk of knocking them unconscious or even killing them if they aren't properly trained to use it. They're only capable of this in certain circumstances however. Magical hotspots across the globe crop up once in a while, like solar flares of invisible energy. By tapping into that, fairies can forcefully draw the energy into themselves and become more powerful for as long as the hotspot exists (which is usually only an hour or less). Once the energy runs out, the fairy loses the transformation until they can find another hotspot. Forced Transformations all look the same- a white, translucent aura surrounding the fairy that pulses with incredible pressure and magical energy. When the fairy has been acquainted more with forced transformations they are capable of holding the form past the duration of the hotspot and retain it for as long as they have stamina and magical energy. {90k+} [x10] {110k+} [x13]/{130k+} [x14]/{140k+} [x16]/ and {150k+} [x19]
Colored Transformation: Some particularly powerful fairies have learned a way to forcefully draw energy from the earth in massive quantities, making them incredibly strong and literally bursting with energy. This transformation, called Colored, is the pinnacle of fairy power. While their transformations are at least similar, each one gives the user their own boost in an aspect or ability they want most generally involving overdrawing mana from the planet to boost themselves beyond what they could normally achieve. Sometimes the transformation increases their fire magic's power to the point of creating white flames, or augments their physical abilities to neargod-like powers. Names of these transformations are based on the color aura they acquire during transformation. Gaining a defensive boost would give a blue aura, which would then be called "Blue [fairy name]" or a pink aura that boosts physical attack is called "Pink [fairy name]". Many inexperienced fey can even knock themselves unconscious from the mental strain such a transformation gives them but that can be mitigated through training. Unlike other transformations, there is no distinct stage or tier that one can cross to garner the next power level. A fairy's transformation is a gradual growth in power that requires training to increase. There are at least distinct power levels that can be measured throughout the transformation's growth, however. {260k+} [x30] / {300k+} [x32] / {320k+} [x34] / {340k+} [x36] / {360k+} [x38] / and {400k+} [x42]
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 28, 2017 17:58:38 GMT -5
@nelly
Greetings, Nelly, welcome to the site. It is nice to have you here!
So, I'll be tending your race today. I'm impressed by the very clear amount of effort that you have put into this, so I'm eager to help you get this into a spot that is playable.
First things first, I have concerns about lore and compatibility with our world. While I am familiar with fey lore in both our own world and the assorted tabletop systems you are likely taking inspiration from, I do believe that it is not compatible with the Dragon Ball world, at least not in the form presented here.
As you can see, that page is rather sparse, which is a blessing and a curse. The good news is, you're afforded a fair bit of creativity in creating them. The bad news is that your current background is not particularly setting appropriate. As it stands, you have this sort of amalgamation of European and DnD/Pathinder fae lore. I advise you to go back to the drawing board and perhaps reconsider the lore. As far as writing goes, that is my primary hang up on the race; I would prefer to see them simplified to some degree and written with the larger tone in mind.
Specifically, their origin is incompatible with Dragon Ball lore as we know it. The Kaio and other higher beings responsible for the creation of life and the multiple universes, and what we know about them, renders the proposed origin impossible.
As a whole, I think background could use a rewrite. I realize this might be hard, but in its current state, it is ill suited for our setting. Though it sounds like you have the start of a wonderful personal project with this.
Now onto traits: much like in tabletop games, traits here tend to have some mechanical impact, though technically not all do. You can have flavor traits, but typically it is needed for a species to have something mechanical going for it. For example, in games like Pathfinder, what would humans be without a bonus feat or dark elves without spell like abilities?
But for now, let's break it down and see what you have currently, to get a sense of what can and cannot work with what you have.
Magic Beings: This is mostly fine. Magic is a thing in Dragon Ball, though not completely separate from ki and the relationship between the two is muddied, though it is not like that of typical western fantasy magic. However, one thing we cannot accept is the current stipulations you have on ki, primarily the one regarding immunity.
Natural Flight: Probably fine as is, and if you wanted to keep it, you could specify this as them starting with a free flight tech.
Natural Growth: Again, probably fine, but you probably want to alter the part about size meaning world altering power. As one can see, we actually have some fairly potent mages on the board, and the magic you present is typically reserved for Kaiou and other celestial beings.
Glamour: Will probably need adjusted based on how you change the lore, but I could see this working as a free shapeshifting tech.
Transformations, I presume, are still being worked out. I advise looking at another race and seeing how they are curved. Though, as a hint, x10 at 11k isn't going to work, unless it's triggered by the full moon or something.
All in all, I heavily advise you look at other races, particularly those that act as our baseline like Saiyans and Earthlings.
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I....was not aware there even was a fairy race in Dragon Ball. 0.o; I'll try reconjiggering my race to be more in line with the actual canon, sorry about that.
As for the abilities and transformations I'll remove the part about them being immune to ki but at the same time I'll remove them being unable to use ki techniques. Is that alright? And for natural growth, since fey exist in this world I'll remove that part since it was part of my own canon lore. Transformations I'm a little stumped on. One of your members explained it to me but....to be honest, they just don't have the same amount or kinds of transformations. Their hair color changes and they get an aura, yeah, but it's essentially one power boost that gets stronger and lasts longer the more you train it instead of immediately jumping to a higher tier. It's a gradual effect. I can try and make it work as a typical transformations but I honestly didn't anticipate it having to be like a normal Saiyan transformation so I might need help coming up with a way to make it work. Could you explain why the first transformation won't work? Admittedly I was using Saiyans as a baseline for their upgrades.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 28, 2017 18:58:37 GMT -5
It's cool. They're pretty obscure, you wouldn't know about them unless you've got some fairly encyclopedic knowledge of DBZ or were led to google "DBZ Faeries" on a whim.
As for the traits. . .
Re; ki: Yes, that is alright, sounds good.
Re; growth: Sweet, all settled.
Transormations. That is fine if it is all like a single transformation. However, I will say: forms, save for god forms, do not have time limits here. If you want to retain the flavor you have now, I highly recommend you look at the Legendary Super Saiyan transformation on Saiyans and extend those upgrades to over the course of an entire PL span. IE, x4 at, say, the start but turns into x10 at 60k or something.
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Yeah, you'll have to forgive me. I watched Dragon Ball Z, but I'm not the pinnacle fan of the series. I didn't even know Vegeta had a brother until the Battle of Gods movie mentioned him. :x
I edited the backstory to remove any indication of other kinds of fey, the First World, or hint of their creation. I left in the other lore because as far as I could see that was up in the air. I removed their glamour and growths and modified their magic and flight abilities. Hopefully their transformation is more in line with what we both want.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 29, 2017 11:12:31 GMT -5
@nelly
Looking a lot better. Can you remove the mention of immortality by age? That's not even something gods have!
For flight, can you write it as: "Faeries begin play with [PT-1] Flight"?
As for transformation, that's a pretty good start, though right now it needs to be modified for them to have transformations over the course of a lifetime, unless you would prefer they not have any early transformations, in which case that is pretty non-standard.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 29, 2017 12:08:58 GMT -5
Alright, we're almost done!
So, basically, with the x10 to have one so early would mean it needs some kind of conditional trigger, like the moon.
Secondly, I need you to format it more like other races. For example:
Legendary Super Saiyan: WIKI LINK: dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Legendary_Super_Saiyan The Legendary Super Saiyan, the most feared warrior of the universe. The records of history tell a tale of the destruction of most of Southern Galaxy by a single individual who had this tremendous power. As the Legendary Super Saiyan, a Saiyan's strength and speed extraordinarily excel that of any Super Saiyan shown previously. Its height and muscle mass also increase by a great amount after transforming; during his transformation, his skin cracks and peels back to reveal green-colored energy in his body. His power level also rises on several occasions, being unable to determine just how powerful it truly is. Additionally, the irises and pupils in his eyes disappear, and his hair changes to a light-green color. {Requires [ST-1] Bulking. 260k+} [x30] / {300k+} [x32] / {320k+} [x34] / {340k+ [x36] / and {360k+} [x38]
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The conditional trigger would be the magical hotspots across the planet. The idea being that planets with life have their own source of life force that sustains the environment and is recharged by the sun. Obviously getting the power boost while the sun's out wouldn't work but think of it as the planet having its own solar flares made of magical energy. It doesn't last as long because the hotspots come and go. It's comparable to the Kaioken in that it burns through energy quickly but gives you the power boost you need to finish off enemies quickly. Either way I upped the required PL for the initial forced transformation.
I changed the formatting a little and added in a line in their magic abilities part that's comparable to the magi race- ki-sensing has difficulty sensing fairies since they use magical energy. Is that alright?
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 30, 2017 10:39:34 GMT -5
By conditional trigger, I mean, like, a celestial event that coincides with dates. If you want, you don't need one with your increased PL requirement.
As for the magic thing, that is fine, though I would recommend modeling it after the Magi trait as that is, currently, the most lore friendly approach we have to magic and I would prefer some consistency across magical beings.
Magic, not Ki - Due to the nature of their abilities Magi are not detected the same way as ki users. [Ki sense cannot pick up anything beyond 10,000 PL on Magi as beyond that they all feel the same. Scouters, however, can still get a good read on them as nowadays models are adapted to the weird form of power.]
@nelly
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 30, 2017 10:55:52 GMT -5
Only a few more things to go. For the magic trait, please clean up the insertion of that bit into your trait, placing it at the end and removing and replacing mention of the Magi with Fairies, please.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Sept 30, 2017 11:01:08 GMT -5
@nelly
Okay, looking good. You have my tentative stamp of approval. Before we can fully approve this, however,another staff members need to give their approval. I'll let people know and we'll see about getting you that second approval real quick.
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