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Saki was now in an area which was in a clearing in the forest. He had his green crane gi, top and bottom with a tough blue t-shirt underneath the top tunic. On the right breast was the mark of the crane insignia as well as on the back. He had a sheathe on his shoulder with a broadsword similar to the brave sword but silver alloy in material. In sheathes on his front utility sash were holders for his alpha silver sais and on the back hip was his black dragon colored nunchucks. On a magnetic patch on his right thigh was a heavily modified scorpion sub machine gun. The shotgun was in a capsule in his utility sash as well as the training models he had in mind for the training session.
He now went into his utility sash and took out his portable Crane Dojo Training areas…having over 40 of them, digital rendering and atmospheric manipulating property were good but it was the stealth to keep prying eyes from watching.
He pressed down on the activation button and threw it into the 20 by 20 foot clearing…soon a 100 by 100 training area existed now in a dome based unit which had the mark of the crane school on it. This would be where the citizens of the citadel can train if they wish…it’s not that far from it…maybe he could have veicules park nearby and come here to see and buy merchandice. Still saki used his mechanical mind to activate Baal’s badge to alert him that the crane school training session was about to start.
(PL: 52,535. Heavy weights on. Weighted PL: 13,133)
Baalbatos was preparing to face the day. He knew that if his Crane Training really went through this day, he would be going into combat, or at least very much physically exerting himself. As such, he chose to dress appropriately for such activities. He was wearing Earthling clothes. Gone were his clothes of fine demonic design. His cloak and the like had been traded in for a plain white tank top and a pair of athletic shorts. Loose and light, he thought, perfect for physical activity to keep him cool. Of course, he was not sure how cool he would stay. He was, of course, still wearing his training weights, as he often did these days. They were certainly proving to be useful, he noted, he just wished that they were more comfortable.
Suddenly, the badge that the Crane Master had given him lit up. Curiously, Baalbatos examined it. It seemed as if information was being transferred to it. Location data, thought Baalbatos, coordinates. A call to action, it seemed. Baalbatos smirked. It was time for him to get started on his training in the Crane arts it seemed. Baalbatos pinned the badge to his tank top and cracked his knuckles. Before long, he was out of his ship and flying towards the area that the badge indicated the training would be taking place. With his far above human speed, it would not take long for the demon to reach the location. And then he saw it: a training hall. He hovered above it for a moment, looking down on it, steeling himself for the training that was yet to come. He could not sense the Crane Master. Just as before, it seemed, the man had no ki. These people and their lack of life energy, thought Baalbatos, such an inconvenience.
He descended, and made for the hall. And as he did, he finally spotted the Crane Master, armed to the teeth. Baalbatos raised a hand in greeting. "Hell, Crane Master!" He exclaimed, "I hope I'm not late! I'm eager to begin training!"
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Saki was on the roof of his training facility and yelled up to greet the incoming student. “Ahoy there!” He then floated up and had the dome open up underneath him…a track and field as well as work out areas now seen in the dome arena. “I hope your ready to work out, because I’m iching for a good work out. Now first, follow me.” He now floated into the dome, hoping baal would follow him. He now landed on the terf with his body in the pushup position. “First off, get down and give me 1,200 pushups. We gotta get your body into the burn of working out to increase the enhancement of your Jin. Your ready to work out, lets go…just try to keep up.”
Soon saki then spoke. “Ready, now!” The signal was given for both saki and baal to get down and start their warm up with plenty of pushups.
The Crane Master greeted him, and as he did, the man took flight and slowly a dome opened up beneath him. It seemed that the Crane Master was ready to begin training. Good, thought Baalbatos, he certainly was ready himself. Baalbatos took off after the man and floated down to join him in the dome. Impressive, thought Baalbatos, quite the facilities. Though, he did not quite see the point, though it would never show on his face. He was, after all, all smiles. Baalbatos did not see the point at all, no, of all these standard Earthling facilities.
The Crane Master gave the call for twelve hundred push-ups. Baalbatos nodded with a grin and dropped to the ground and began to push away, but again, he had to wonder what the point was. The man claimed it was to increase his 'jin', but to Baalbatos, that was a load of malarkey. Baalbatos was a powerful man. If it were about fitness, there was no point. Twelve hundred push ups was nothing to Baalbatos. He could do that without hardly breaking a sweat. It would just take time. But he kept pushing away. The training would all be worth it. At least he hoped so...
Saki now looked at the effort Baal was putting in, watching him do the pushup as his mechanical mind kept tabs on Baal (The man is able to do that many pushups…alright.) After he saw that baal was keeping up he then got to his feet. “Alright, now you got the warm up…now it’s time to practice a technique I’m going to show you. First I will make it so you can see me do it.”
Saki now jumped up into the air, only high enough for baal to see with a powerlevel supressed to 5,000 and shot down, cortorting his body to shoot down with weak spikes of energy to provide the boost of speed needed.
He then shot down fast with his right knee out and slammed it hard into the ground, making a five foot crator upon landing, the dome shaking as the lid closed and the suppressors kept the energy shockwave from breaking the dome.
He now looked up and faced Baalbatos. “That was one of the first tier moves of the crane school I’m going to teach you. That technique is the super knee uppercut. One of the lower tier techniques of the crane…it’s really something though. If you land it, your opponent is going to be feeling it in the morning, seriously. It’s a finisher…plan and simple. If not a finisher then a game changer.”
The ground which saki broke began to repair itself from the digital rendering protocalls and was now as good as new.
“Now all I did is contort my body for the sake of launching a drop knee but gathered energy in my body to achieve the speed boost of my attack, making my knee uppercut, ‘SUPER’ because of the force I’m decending it. It’s not just gravity, it’s your energy…using flight passively to assist your speedy decent.”
He now focused his body and began to digitize and two Saki’s came out of the single Saki.
“This is a technique dear to my heart, it’s called duplication. You can make a duplicate of yourself to train with and attack with but the battle power of each is halved…a really good training tool.” They both said in unison.
So, thought Baalbatos, they were done with the warm up already. Good, he was ready to begin the training in earnest. The demon was not the kind of man who liked to waste time on frivolities. The sooner that they got into the real meat of the training, the happier the lilac skinned demon would be. He'd rather waste no time at all, but he supposed a little wasted time could not hurt so much. The demon listened with vested interest as the man proclaimed that it was time for the first of many techniques to be shown.
The silvery eyes of the demon watched as the Crane Master catapulted himself into the air, flying like some kind of missile. As he came down, he accelerated. Interesting, thought Baalbatos, he's certainly moving quickly. But for what purpose? The demon watched as the man slammed into the ground, a small crater opening up around him as he made contact with the ground.
Quite powerful, thought the demon, certainly a force to be reckoned with. The Crane Master explained the technique in greater detail. One of the most basic moves of the Crane School, the technique still had a fair amount of power behind it. As was evident by the crate it left behind in the ground. Which was actually beginning to repair itself at this very moment. Interesting, thought Baalbatos, was this some sort of augmented reality? Or simply advanced holographics? Either way, Baalbatos knew that he was not dealing with a typical training arena. It seemed the Crane Master had quite the advanced technology at his disposal for training.
So, thought the demon, the Crane Master had used the power of flight to augment his own technique. Quite interesting, indeed. It was a fairly simple trick, thought Baalbatos, but it was an effective one. One that the demon would be able to duplicate with little effort. He supposed that was the point of it, though. If it were a beginning technique, it was meant to be simple to replicate, as to give students something to work with. And Baalbatos could certainly work with it.
But before he could even begin to attempt the technique, the Crane Master showed him another technique. 'Duplication', he called it, and Baalbatos watched with amusement as two Crane Masters suddenly took shape in front of him. A handy technique, thought the demon, but at a cost. Halving one's strength was certainly a big risk, even at the benefit of putting one in an advantageous position with numbers. Perhaps the Crane Master had it right when he said the technique was handy for training. A mirror match, thought the demon. His grin grew wider as he considered it. He supposed that people were their own greatest enemies anyway, might as well make it physical.
"Quite impressive, Crane Master," said Baalbatos, "But if you don't mind, I'd like to attempt it for myself."
And with that, Baalbatos leaped into the air, knee extended. He moved fast, as fast as his weights would let him. And, as he began his descent, Baalbatos boosted his speed with his power of flight. He slammed into the ground, hard, and a small crater opened up around him. Smaller than the Crane Master's, but sizeable enough. "Like this, master?" Asked the demon with a grin.
Saki tried not to be long winded in his preaching but he had to make the student understand, it wasn’t really nagging but delivering information as he demonstrated a school technique and a personal favorite, duplication.
He now heard the demon say he was going to attempt the move and saki cheered him on. He jumped up to about a foot higher then saki’s height from doing the attack then shot down, really hard and fast, saki’s power was agmented so he was at at least 1 million and nine hundred thousand power level in each clone. They looked up and saw the form of baal as he did the move. It was a decent form, putting more weight on the attacking kneecap.
The ground was them impacted by baal and the whole terf was cratered, not as big as saki’s but just enough to noticely change the environment.
The crane master smiled. “Excellent work Baalbatos….now do it again and this time put more energy and weight into your attacking knee.” The saki on Baalbatos’s right stated
The saki on Baalbatos’ right now concluded. “By the way…try not to lose speed when you preform the nessasary adjustments to perfect your profiency in the super knee uppercut technique.”
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Writer's notes: -Teaching [BG][OT-1] Super Knee Uppercut -Using Dojo
Again, thought Baalbatos, so this was training. Just a bunch of repeated motions and doing things over and over until one finally got it right. Well, thought Baalbatos, he certainly did not mind the process of getting things right. He was a perfectionist by heart. With a nod, the demon spoke, "Of course, Crane Master. Once more! And this time, I'll mind my speed."
Baalbatos launched himself into the air once more. He ascended quickly, moving fast, knee extended as before. He kept moving, higher than before as if to keep his speed up. And, when he reached the height of his movement, he began his descent once again. He pushed himself as fast as he could go, knee plummeting towards the ground with such great force. And finally, he smacked into it, driving the knee into the ground. Once again, a crater opened up underneath him, a little bigger than before.
"I hope that is satisfactory, Crane Master," said Baalbatos as he rose from where he was crouching.
The crane master was impressed by the young demon’s spirit, he was willing to try the attack again to perfect it, not caring about his physical body. He did give him a book on the devil’s stance which was a favorite of taopaipai. Saki and his duplicate now saw the youth jump up higher into the air and scanned him the entire time, keeping his physical characteristics on file, it was impressive to say the least however; the boy was putting more force into his kneecap as well as putting more weight and energy behind his decent, he now calculated the velocity of Baalbatos falling hard to the ground was twice as fast then before and as he impacted the terf again, it the impact was three times more powerful then last time, the crater much bigger.
He clone on the demon student’s left then locked eyes with baalbatos after catching up to him and replied to him. “Yes that is satisfactory. I expect the landing to get stronger in time.” Saki duplicate number two then smiled. “your execution of correcting your flaws in form is what intreges me the most about you..your ability to improve…demons have endless potencial…they just don’t know the sacrifices and suffering one has to suffer as a demon when your sealed away.”
Both masters now stood across from Baalbatos and one readies his right finger after stepping 10 paces away. “This is the second technique of the first tier of crane school mastery…I expect you to be like a priest or mercenary after the training, it’s your life.” The crane master clone said as he was taking aim
The second clone which was saki now replied while setting up his arms outstretched infront of his body with his two palms cupped to catch the dodon ray. “Now watch this…I’m not only showing you the Dodon Ray but a way to block it.”
The aiming clone now yelled. “Dodon RAY!!” Firing an orange focused superheated blast in the form of a fingerbeam. The defending saki now put his palms up to block the attack. The energy breaking of his ki infused Jin on his arms and feet. The ray kept being block by the palms and then it died out on his hands.
The defending clone then replied. “That is how you defend the dodon ray, you need to make yourself like a unbreakable wall that’ll only stain and not break to beat it.” The attacking clone then replied walking over to Baalbatos. “The dodon ray is a simple energy blast in the form of a ray which explodes on impact..that’s it, you can charge it with energy to make the attack as strong as your maximum if you so desire…but you will be winded if you charge if for a long period of time.”
The defending clone then replied. “It would increase in destructive power with a charge but you gotta be like a magician to pull it off…A Homicide Magician..So lets see you try to apply the example you’ve seen with the last technique for this tier of training into practical use.”
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Writer's Notes: -Using Dojo (25% pl gains) to both plus the ability to teach school techniques -Teaching Baalbatos [OT-1] Super Knee Uppercut & [OT-1] Dodon Ray -looking to learn [OT-1] Rubber Foot for self
Last Edit: May 29, 2016 15:22:03 GMT -5 by Deleted
So, thought Baalbatos, he was satisfactory. The demon smirked. He liked to think that everything he did was satisfactory, but he was willing to correct himself if that was not the case. The Crane Master went on about the potential of demons, and Baalbatos simply smiled. He was not quite sure if all demons had the same potential that he did. The lilac skinned demon liked to think that he had more potential than the rest of the demonic race. He'd met some demons who definitely seemed if they lacked any kind of potential at all, the kind of weakness that made Baalbatos question how they still managed to be alive.
The man also spoke of being sealed away. Baalbatos nodded, but he thought that he'd never have to worry about that. No, he was much too craft to be sealed away like a common plebian demon. He was smart and his power was growing by the day. But he'd say nothing, not even make a single facial movement as he considered it, lest he get into a philosophical debate on the matter with the Crane Master and delay his training even further than it already had been by the push ups.
But it seemed that they were ready to move on to the second part of the techniques. One of the Crane Masters made a comment on how this should be his life after they completed their training. Baalbatos grinned and nodded. "Well, of course," said the demon, "Crane Master, I assure you I will put this knowledge to great use."
The man went on to explain that not only was he going to show Baalbatos the technique, but a defense against it as well. How handy, thought the demon, perhaps he would have to master that technique on his own time. The Dodon Ray, thought the demon, it certainly sounded strong.
He watched as the Crane Master lifted his finger and aimed it. A brief second later, a powerful orange beam of energy erupted from the man's fingertip, taking the form of an elongated beam. Well, thought the demon, that would hurt. But the other Crane Master raised a defense and dispered the attack in just a moment. Baalbatos offered the two a small round of applause, before stepping forward. "Well, Crane Master," said the demon, "That was quite impressive. Now, allow me to try my hand at it."
Baalbatos rose a finger slowly, and aimed it down range of them. This, he thought, would be easy. It was a simple beam technique, the likes of which the demon had mastered decades ago. He concentrated for a second, focusing his energy in the tiny tip of his index finger. And, a moment later, bright orange light burst forth from the finger of the demon, burning its way through the air. The superheated beam tore through the air. Very nice, thought Baalbatos, quite strong, even if he did not put all of his strength into the attack. He turned back to face the Crane Masters. "Well, Crane Master, I think I've got beam attacks down pat. And I must say, the Crane School has quite the interesting arsenal if this is only the beginning."
Unlocking [OT-1] Dodon Ray!
Last Edit: May 29, 2016 13:06:17 GMT -5 by Baalbatos
Saki previously used the ‘duplication’ technique to showcase the offensive power of the dodon ray and the defense to stop it. A fair trade against varients of the dodon ray,
He now saw baalbatos ready his finger and fire a dodon ray which ripped through the sky and hit the artificial mountain. He decided to have the impact on the mountain to stay to leave it’s mark.
The child now said he has an understanding of Dodon Ray and both clones now smiled. “Good,” The one on the left began to pipe up. “You know now the basics of the crane school techniques….i have a training uniform for you.” He took out a clothing capsule and pressed down on the button, throwing it on the ground where it bounced and poof” 5 Crane School Training gi’s appeared. 5 white shirts with the school’s insignia on the front with 5 green bracers, 5 green pants.5 Red sashes and 5 black combat boots.
The clone on the right then replied. “That is your training uniform…it is said that this stance can gain you great heights once mastered. You’ll be your own man, an improved man. Now the book on the devil’s claw formations, I want you to read that on your own time…but attack wise, what’s your greatest asset?” The clone on the left continued. “Is it your agility, your endurance, your power or is it the unspoken victory…by saying you don’t want to fight, that’s your victory against them?” The right clone then spoke once more “That seems somewhat pacifist but there is some homor in that, being humble is good in life, but at the end of the day, they have to know where you stand…there’s certain things you don’t do. It hurts to be put in such a situation…it really does.”
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Writer's Notes: -Using Dojo (25% pl gains) to both plus the ability to teach school techniques -Teaching Baalbatos [OT-1] Super Knee Uppercut & [OT-1] Dodon Ray -looking to learn [OT-1] Rubber Foot
Last Edit: May 29, 2016 15:20:49 GMT -5 by Deleted
The mechanical man threw out a capsule, and before him appeared five uniforms. Ah, thought Baalbatos, so the man does have uniforms. He'd half expected the man to let him go on as he was. Baalbatos nodded his thanks for the uniforms, even if they were not particularly his style. Well, he thought, he'd only need to wear them during the training. He supposed he could put up with that.
"Thank you for the uniforms, Crane Master," said the demon, "I appreciate it. I'll wear them well."
The Crane Master went on about what strength was. Baalbatos stared at him as he considered it. It posed a decent enough question. What was his greatest strength? There were a few potential answers to that, and Baalbatos thought that he knew, but he said nothing, instead allowing the Crane Master to speak unfettered. Finally, the demon spoke. "You ask a great question, Crane Master," said the demon, "I'll consider it as I continue to train in your arts."
Saki now gave Baalbatos his uniforms, his response being polite and accepting. He then asked the demon was his greatest strength was…it seemed as he caused the demon to start some soul searching for the answer because he didn’t really reply right away…it looked like he needed time to find his inner strength. He replied saying he had asked a good question that he will concider while training in the crane methods.
Saki decided that Baalbatos was trained adequetly enough to master the first tier of crane school techniques. “Alright, we’re done for now, I’ll call for you in a day or two.” Saki now gave Baalbatos his uniforms, his response being polite and accepting. He then asked the demon was his greatest strength was…it seemed as he caused the demon to start some soul searching for the answer because he didn’t really reply right away…it looked like he needed time to find his inner strength. He replied saying he had asked a good question that he will concider while training in the crane methods.
Saki decided that Baalbatos was trained adequetly enough to master the first tier of crane school techniques. “Alright, we’re done for now, I’ll call for you in a day or two.”
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Writer's Notes: -Using Dojo (25% pl gains) to both plus the ability to teach school techniques -Teaching Baalbatos [OT-1] Super Knee Uppercut & [OT-1] Dodon Ray -looking to learn [OT-1] Rubber Foot
So, it seemed that they were done here. That would do well enough, thought the demon. He could certainly do with a small break for now. "As you say, Crane Master," said the demon, "I thank you for your training thus far, and I look forward to continuing with it shortly. But, for now, I'll take my leave."
And with that, Baalbatos moved to collect the uniforms, folding them up and tucking them beneath his arm. He gave the Crane Master a small bow and a grin. This had been quite interesting so far, he thought. He looked forward to whatever came next, whatever knowledge and powers the man decided he was going to bestow upon Baalbatos next.
"I'll be seeing you," said the demon as he took off into the air, leaving the man behind. Yes, thought the demon, they would be seeing each other again soon. Hopefully very soon. Baalbatos had much he wanted to learn.
Thread exit! Fun thread, Saki! Unlocking Tier 1 of Crane School! I'd like PL with heavy weights, dojo, and LMB, please! Thanks!
Saki was happy with how this training session turned out. Private lessons really did beat out full blown schooling. Even with his 5 orin monk masters and their senpais and assistants to train the artists to show them a better way then revenge and murder….show them that punishing pain and domination beat out right murder. He was away from his school in the orin temple grounds…wanting to give Baalbatos private lessons.
He waved bye to Baalbatos and jumped into the air, firing dodon rays at the ground multiple times. It was time for the master to train right now in his dome which opened to let Baalbatos out.
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Writer's notes: -Saki has taught Baalbatos [OT-1] Super Knee uppercut and [OT-1] Dodon Ray -Saki has learned [OT-1]Rubber Foot -Saki has used Dojo
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