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The young Saiyaness jumped around dodging ki fire all around. Her tank top holding the weights under her body... Nemesis would watch from a distant as she observed Mitsuba's training. Mitsuba sweat heavily, her hair glowing gold with her eyes giving off that beautiful teal. The robots surrounded her as she panted and stared at them... "Crap... This is really exhausting..." she said as she jumped high as the robots fired. All the robots blasted each other and destroyed one another. Friendly fire was a bonus, she guessed... As the simulation finished, she stood proudly and straightened herself up before placing a hand on her hip.
Nemesis kept her arms crossed, watching her. At the last moment, for some reason... Nemesis decided to join back with Mitsuba before they left. It was really strange but it kept Mitsuba happy. Right when Mitsuba noticed Nemesis, she let off a huge smile and waved at her. Nemesis just kept her stance and that's when Mitsuba would cart wheel over and flip over to Nemesis with her arms up as the execution! Mitsuba lost balance of herself but kept her smile. "Taa-daaa!" she shouted, trying to impress the strange Saiyaness lady. "Hmph. I've seen better," was all she said towards Mitsuba.
Mitsuba didn't mind that comment, actually just keeping her smile. "Ohhhh? You've seen better huh, tough guy?" she said teasing Nemesis... Nemesis would turn her head directly towards Mitsuba, "You do understand... You're not even in full control over Super Saiyan... Right?" she said towards Mitsuba. Mitsuba's eyes would grow widely, scratching her head... "Huh..? I've always thought this was the full power of Super Saiyan... I've learned how to get into it without forcing myself," she said which made Nemesis wave her finger back and forth. "See, you learned how to get into it without anger but... you're not fully super saiyan. You feel the hamstrings in your joints being pulled? You feel the pressure on your body? Being a full power super saiyan, you learn to avoid the strains. It feels almost completely natural in Super Saiyan when you control it," as a matter of fact... Nasu once told Leena while training her that you could go to sleep in Full Power Super Saiyan. That's just how free you felt in full power. Anyways, Nemesis just kept an eye on Mitsuba as her secret younger sister scratched her head.
"So... This is actually another transformation..? This isn't the best Super Saiyan form?" she asked Nemesis, feeling confused on all this. Nemesis sighed lightly, "You see... The form you're in is called 'Grade Two Super Saiyan'... It's basically a stepping stone for the Super Saiyan path. It means you've learned how to get into it without using anger to lock into it. Being a Super Saiyan is an emotional moment however you can push the emotional part aside once you figure it out. When I had Super Saiyan, it took me awhile to figure out how to control it completely. The last time I remember it completely... I used Super Saiyan in a meeting when I was on Nasu's side. I felt so many strains across my body but I think...? I mastered it? I wish I remembered..." she said, her memories still completely blurry on some parts.
Mitsuba kept her power on still, the power flaring on... "Ugh... I still need help... On getting into this form..." she said... Nemesis slowly nodded and looked at her within her helmet. "First... You must remain calm. Stretch your body and pretend you're not in your transformation," she told Mitsuba as she followed her instructions carefully. She began stretching her arms and legs.... Trying to loosen up and calm herself.. "O-Okay..?" saying in a confused tone. She closed her eyes, thinking about some positive things... Things that didn't involve Super Saiyan-like feelings... Her power flares would flicker a bit, feeling the power just powering down... However, she felt a muscle cramp suddenly! Her eyes go wide with a little bit of tears from shock... Painful tears really, "YAYAYAAYYA!!! OW OW! OW!!!" she yelped as her shoulder began twitching itself.
Nemesis grumbled and quickly slapped the back of Mitsuba's head! Mitsuba would feel the pain from her head now! "HEY! WHAT THE HECK?!" she shouted and Nemesis twitched a bit with her eyes under the helmet. "Quit being a fucking baby! Back when I was with the Empire we were brutally beaten for releasing ONE tear. I do not want to see a little baby cry over a cramp in her shoulder!" she yelled as Mitsuba looked at her with a bit of sadness... "Well the Empire is a bunch of stupid jerks!" she yelled towards Nemesis... Nemesis sighed, "I know they are kid! Get your head back into gear! Focus on your transformation!" she yelled. Mitsuba sucked her pain up and tried focusing. The pain was immense but she was learning how to sustain it...
The pain was really immense trying to figure out.. Her muscles cramped trying to figure how to relax, "This... really hurts!" she shouted... Nemesis snarled at her, "Quit being a fucking pussy you idiot! The pain is nothing more than a joke! Show that pain you're the one in CONTROL!" she snapped towards Mitsuba. Mitsuba began getting aggravated with Nemesis's yelling. However, this aggravation started to help her take control of her body... She grit her teeth together, getting more and more aggravated. "Don't give me that stupid look! Fucking FOCUS YOU IDIOT!" she shouted towards Mitsuba. Mitsuba began breathing a bit heavy, "Shut up... Shut up!!!" she shouted towards Nemesis. Luckily, Leena knew how this worked. "You're such a little pansy! Getting angry over this?!" she snapped towards Mitsuba.
Mitsuba's energy suddenly shot off and not a single ki flare was seen. Her hair not glowing but just blonde. Her eyes not glowing either! She quickly snapped and attempted to reach out for Nemesis! However, she quickly stopped as her hands nearly reached her throat. Mitsuba gave a sudden chuckle, only messing with Nemesis. "Naaaah! I've been playing around! I had this figured out when you first told me!" she said giggling. Nemesis felt a sense of shock, "H-Huh?!" and that's when Mitsuba rubbed her chin. "You know... You mentioned stuff about the Empire... I really don't know too much about them other than the fact that they killed my mother... Could you tell me about them?" she asked her friend. Her transformation felt so good and natural. The whole cramping thing was just to add dramatic effects.
Nemesis let a soft sigh out and motioned the young Saiyaness to come closer. Mitsuba happily moved up. "Listen here... I am not to keen on the Empire. They may be gone now but these mother fuckers are treacherous dogs. They left me to die against a damn Super Saiyan... However, I will not tell you anything about them. They're fucking idiots and if I ever met someone from the Empire who somehow still managed to survive I would personally flick them off and tell them to fucking die," she said. Mitsuba studied the Saiyaness... She seemed to really hate the Empire...
"Can you tell me about your past then in the Empire?" she asked. Nemesis looked away from Mitsuba with a sigh, "I was afraid you'd ask me my past..." she said... She slowly looked back at Mitsuba and began her tale. "You see... I am no average elite. I was apart of program where I was taken from birth and trained to become a heartless, soulless, and unstoppable machine. They took my innocence and shit all over it... I lost a friend who was like a sister to me in that dreadful place. I made some new friends and what not but they're probably all fucking dead now. The last Saiyan I met from that shithole who actually was apart of my squad was Gina. I don't know where the fuck she went. Knowing her tastes... She probably followed that dumbass Nasu... She's somewhere with that Kingdom of his, probably still a lowly private," she said. Gina was a close friend to Leena... Extremely close towards Leena's end. She doesn't remember what happened to Gina but she didn't forget her.
"I really wish I knew where she was... She was kinda all I had..." saying softly to herself. Mitsuba slightly frowned, "I hope your friend is okay..." she said softly. Nemesis turned away, "I really don't fucking care anymore... She was weak anyways..." she said. Nemesis turned her head towards Mitsuba, "You did well kid... Had me fooled but I actually enjoyed showing you how to do it... If anything, I wish I still had my old Empire armor... I think you'd look strong in it," she said. Mitsuba's eyes glared, "Empire Armor? You guys had your own armor? I thought you guys wore the universal uniform," she said. Nemesis cleared her throat a bit, having to explain more crap to the saiyaness. "Well, we were awarded a special armor only for our program. It was kinda bulky and junky honestly but the armor made us feel so prideful and honored. We certainly looked intimidating," she said. Nemesis grew tired of talking to Mitsuba... Her old saiyan past giving her negative thoughts, "Are we done with the questions? I'm tired of thinking about my damned past," she asked the Saiyaness. Mitsuba slowly nodded with a sigh before powering herself down... "Yeah... I guess... Thanks Nemmy.." she said as Nemesis began to walk off. Tonight was going to be hard resting... Nemesis was getting those thoughts once more...
The Saiyaness would stand there thinking about the whole situation with Nemesis... She was certainly a depressed character at most. She always seemed miserable. Mitsuba would watch as her friend walked out of the training room, which made the saiyaness power back up! Her power level would dramatically rise higher! After finally transforming, she maxed her Super Saiyan transformation out. She was now, fully powered!
The Saiyaness had no aura around her, keeping it lowered. She made this look easy to learn but it really wasn't. She had to really get in her mind to do this. Mitsuba smirked as she looked around. "Heeeeey! This feels actually really cool!" she shouted in a hint of excitement. Thought the weights she wore underneath pulled her power down, she still was strong! Mitsuba would pull herself forward and yell out loud, "Set up some targets for me, please!" she said with a smile. With that, the computer brought up some targets for her which made her get serious from that point. Launching herself forward, she began speeding her body up and performing Soy School melee techniques against her targets! It was so quick! So fast! She was almost doing it with a blink of an eye! Target after target, the targets would explode from her sheer power.
After rushing around and destroying her targets in front of her, more targets appeared behind her which triggered her to use her favorite ability. Pulling forth a Saiyan Lancer, she would throw it at the direction of the targets behind her and destroy several behind her! Without hesitation, she sensed a ki ball rushing towards her which makes her split across the ground to dodge the incoming blast! With success, she would spin up and fire a ki ball back, blowing up the target! The training was over all, finished now!
Smiling at her progress, she would power down. She would stretch herself and wiggle her body, "Where is Koma?! I've been so bored lately! He's supposed to train me on my next level of Soy School! Kommmmmmmmyyyyyy! Where are you, snuggy monk?" she said. Clearly, she was just in the mood to annoy her cousin. She wanted to be that little sister figure in his life. She would look around until she heard the door open behind her. She couldn't sense the power but still she went on... "KOMMY? IS THAT CHUUUU?" she said!
Post by King of All on Apr 24, 2017 21:45:57 GMT -5
Using: Allied Edifice(Redemption): +25%gains
Koma passed by Nemesis as she exited the training room and he couldn't help but eye her cautiously. He knew next to nothing about the woman other than she used to be an Empire Saiyan... He didn't know where she came from beyond that... what had she done since the Empire fell, and why was she just now resurfacing with Mitsuba... He didn't fully trust her, but then again this mark made him very skeptical of everyone. He let out an audible sigh as he passed her, unsure of what to think about the whole scenario before stepping into the training room.
He was greeted by a fully powered Super Saiyan calling him Kommy. Already feeling slightly irritated from his own thoughts, the saiyan rolled his eyes as he walked inside, letting the door close behind him.
"KomA~ and yeh it's me. You look like you've been practicing hard, you sure you can handle more training today?" He asked her on a much kinder tone than Nemesis would have. It seemed Nemesis was all about being rough on Mitsuba to bring out her potential while Koma felt he needed to be gentler with her... frankly he was afraid that he tried to train her too hard he might hurt her... she wasn't like other fighters he had trained or fought with. She was more... fragile, precious to him...
"oh and by the way, you're going to have to tell us more about that Nemesis girl... I don't mind her coming along but... we kind of need to know what her intentions are... with the Alliance being so new, i'm worried about people trying to infiltrate us and make us fail from the start." Koma voiced out loud, wondering what her thoughts on the matter were. Mitsuba was to be on his council after-all. Even if she was young, he wanted to know how she viewed things since they were so often different from his own.
WC: 325
Last Edit: Apr 26, 2017 20:07:32 GMT -5 by King of All
As the Saiyan walked in and was identified by those black eyes, she used the power of her Super Saiyan to speed up on him and embrace him! "KOMMMMMMMYYYYY~~~!!!!" she yelled in pure excitement! With her luck, her super saiyan speed would be able to catch him quickly! Her warm embrace wasn't tight like a Super Saiyan's strength but she would keep a good lock on him. She was so happy to see Komastu still around! She hadn't seen Komastu since they left Earth which was quite a bit ago... She's been so sad because it felt like Komastu was hiding from her but he wouldn't do that! Right...?
That gorgeous smile would be seen as she looked up at him, "Noooo! It's Kommy now! There's Nanny, Nassy, Nemmy, now Kommy! I think it fits you well! It actually makes you sound kinda cute~!" giggling to herself as she released him and kept her super saiyan active. She wore her casual clothes which was fine because no serious manners were around. Komastu mentioned about her training hard and asking her if she was ready for the next level. Mitsuba jumped up and down in front of him, clearly still that crazy girl Koma has seen since day one. "Yes, yes, yes, yeeeesssss! I've been practicing so much! Nemmy has taught me some cool movements involving the Soy School forms which was pretty cool! She's really awesome!" she said as she couldn't help but shiver from the pure excitement of Koma even being here.
It's not that the young girl was creepy over him, she just absolutely loved him. She's never had someone like him be her big brother-like role. She's dreamed of that for years and now that she's finally got it... She's going to take advantage of it as much as she could. Before Mitsuba would act all crazy again, the saiyan would then bring up that they needed more information on this Nemesis figure. Koma only brought this up because he was worried about shady figures in their group and apparently Nemesis seemed like one. Mitsuba would give him a big pout, "But, but, but... She's really nice! She actually joined because of me! She's no trouble I promise!" she said.
Mitsuba knew that Nemesis was no big deal. If anything, she was only trustworthy for Mitsuba which was a plus. Mitsuba would forget about Nemesis now though. She wanted her big cousin to train her! Moving over to grab his arm lightly, she gave him a very soft and innocent look, whimpering like a puppy now... "Kommmmy~! Pleeeeaaaaseee traaaaiiinn meeeeee! Dun' make meh' saaaaad!" blinking her eyes a few times to make Komastu give in on the training. By doing this, Komastu might find this rather annoying. Her acting childish and begging-like make be annoying for the saiyan man but she wouldn't know. She stuck her tongue out at him, moving in to push a little button of his, "Or are you like the mean ol' Nassy?"
Post by King of All on Apr 25, 2017 15:14:32 GMT -5
"Uhhh..." He had zero idea what to do whenever Mitsuba seemed to vanish and sudenly reappear holding him in a bear hug. He found himself gripping his fist tightly, only inches away from punching her in the gut out of reflex... it had been close, and she would have to remind her not to startle him like that... While he had control over the Mark's power, it kept him on edge... furthermore, her prancing around like an idiot was annoying as hell, but at the same time it was kind of endearing... only a little bit.
He'd remove his fist from the near punch to pat Mitsuba on the head, ruffling her hair to act like the annoying older sibling as she spoke, really really fast.
"I'm not cute, now THAT's mean" He told her, sounding far more serious than he meant too. He finally stopped messing up her golden hair as he let a small smile appear on his lips as he felt the power emanating from her. She had definitely gotten stronger, and by this burst of energy it looked like she had been able to master her Super Saiyan transformation without having to worry about turning into a monster as she complained about before. then Mitsuba said something that caught Komatsu off guard, and caused his smile to falter as he rasied an eyebrow.
"She knows how to use the Soy School??? Who taught her? There aren't a lot of people who know it." He was growing even more suspicious of her at this point... the more unknowns came up the more he would keep an eye on her. He would have to ask Toru and Kyuri if they know everyone that had learned the soy School over the years, and maybe figure out who she was that way. Her history just... didn't fit. although Mitsuba assured him that she wouldn't be trouble and Komatsu could feel himself being torn between his own suspicions and Mitsuba's reassurance.
"If you're sure, then I'll entrust her to you. Better keep a close eye on her Councillor" He said with a teasing smirk growing on his face. He moved to get out of Mitsuba's grasp only to have her grab his arm and basically beg her to train him. He rolled his eyes once more at her antics and was about to answer her when she compared him to Nasu... He swiftly pulled his arm from her grasp as he stepped past her.
"i'm not like Nasu. Are you wearing your weights? Just... get in stance already..." His eyes would flash red and this time, he clearly sounded irritated... no joking or awkward smiles. That was one comment Komatsu definitely didn't want to hear.
Her heart and soul was pure fire! Lighting up with excitement! As Koma would rub the girl's hair that made her smiled and close her eyes. She liked the feeling of him being a bit annoying but at the same time felt a bit annoyed. It was all a mix of happy feelings! She would chuckle and grab his palm as he pet her and lightly and softly pushed it away, "Okaaaay staaawp~! You should know I'm not a pet~!" she said jokingly towards him. She would smile and look up at him, his face seeming happy by her progress. She didn't really know how he was feeling but she would smile anyways.
Komastu brought himself to speak but it sounded really kinda rough... He said that he wasn't cute and how that was mean for what she said. She gave him her classical pouty look, "I thought we both agreed not to beat ourselves up! Big ol' jerky! Nonsense Kommy! You are cute! How else could you have such a lovely sweet mate, like Kohl? I hope you've been good with her now! Treat your mate with wub!" she said, giving him a wink. She enjoyed every moment of this. She always wanted to be a family girl!
As she mentioned Nemesis knowing Soy School, Komastu turned sour suddenly... This made Mitsuba a little worried deep down because something felt wrong but... She kept her smile on because she was a pleaser! "I'm not sure where she learned it... She told me she only knows the basics... She's never kept up with the techniques but she's been practicing the motions of it in melee. She's actually really good!" she said with a smile.
When he told her she better watch her, she noticed him giving her that teasing smirk which made her chuckle a bit while holding his arm from begging him. However... His face getting irritated which made Mitsuba's smile slowly fade... 'W-What's going on with him..? His eyes just changed colors for a bit... I-I better try and make him smile at least!' she said to herself trying to be the peacekeeper she was in heart. Komastu would snap saying how he's not Nasu which made her lightly giggle, "I'm only playing you big munchie love~! You're not like him~! You're a silly Kommy~!" she said giggling once more. She was trying to be really soft on him to lighten him up. He asked her if she had her weights on, "Of course I do~! Did a fly go in your brain and lay eggs? I thought you'd sense meh~!" she said sticking her tongue out. Koma gave her the orders of getting in her stance, which she happily did in an instance!
"Oh boy! Oh boy! Oh boy! Just me and my big cousin training it on! What's up next Kommy? Jumping?! Running?! Ooooo~ I can't wait! Show me!" she said excitingly. She was so eager to learn! Her body was all prepared for this moment!
Post by King of All on Apr 26, 2017 6:55:16 GMT -5
"I don't know about that, sometimes you act like an over excitable puppy." Komatsu commented when she retorted that she wasn't a pet. Of course he didn't see her as one in the slightest, but the head pat was one of the ways Komatsu showed his affection towards someone else. He never wanted to seem week so he rarely succumbed to hugs or anything of the sort. At least, it was limited to Kohl... in which Mitsuba was quick to bring out and the simple mention of the girls name turned his cheeks red.
Mitsuba was definitely strange, always hyperactive but she seemed... overly so today as she picked on him. Now just embarassed over the short discussion of his mate komatsu returned his attention to their training, stepping away from Mitsuba just as she assured him that Nemesis was a friend. He limited himself to a nod at that statement before turning once more to face her, instructing her to get into the soy stance.
She wasn't done talking though and Koma's eye twitched lightly as he looked at her, still trying to get used to her personality... She would finally slip into the Soy stance but was practically vibrating in place with how excited she was.
"Mitsuba you're going to need to focus!" He barked at her, loweing his own body into the soy stance as he stood across from her, making it clear he intended to fight her himself. His body began to give off a light blue ki as he charged his attack, the ki settling against his body like a shield all of a sudden.
"You're going to learn the next step of the Soy School today so I need you to stay focused, because I'm going to hit you. A lot. So stay in your Super Saiyan form and watch me closely okay? You'll need to repeat these moves" He told her, waiting for confirmation from her before charging at her while still in his base form. He knew he would do a lot less damage to the girl this way, and that was just fine with him.
"This is the Rebellion Spear!" He instructed mid dash, aiming a strike Mitsuba with his charge. If successful he would then turn his body to kick Mitsuba away from him. all the while that blue energy would glow around him, fueling his strength.
WC: 399 Used OT-2 Rebellion Spear: 255,569PL The user charges a light-blue aura around his body as he strikes a crouching pose. Then, he charges toward the opponent using the blue aura as a shield, inflicting a great amount of damage.
Last Edit: Apr 26, 2017 20:13:42 GMT -5 by King of All
Mitsuba honestly couldn't help herself being excited. Komastu had been gone for quite a bit of time from her little cousin. She was honestly like a dog greeting their owner/friend home. Okay, she wasn't a pet but she loved being affectionate towards him! She's never been allowed to let her emotional expressions go like this so she took every chance she could get at it! Even though Komastu was acting like a big jerk right now she still would string that soft heart towards him! He will take that heart with love and accept her for who she was!!!
Okay, back to it. Mitsuba stood there in motion, finally getting still after he barked at her to focus. Mitsuba couldn't help but chuckle, clearly being quite hyper still. Komastu would give her a big warning that he was going to come at her which made her smirk. "Ooooo~!! Kommy gonna swing at me? Bring et!" she said towards him. He also reminded her that she needs to take notes by watching him. This was going to easy! She locked her position and nodded, "Bring it Kommy!!" and this was it. He would charge in with blue aura and bring his elbow up. Now, usually if this was a serious scenario she would dodge it but since this was all training... Mitsuba would bluntly take this blow right in the face which stung her nose a bit! She sucked her teeth in and felt the next feeling kick in! KICK! BAM! Mitsuba slid across the ground on her feet, taking that hit! Mitsuba knew this move already though! He was just repeating him!
The young Saiyaness would snicker and simply say, "Oh? That move? That's easy!" and disappearing before his very eyes, she'd reappear and attempt to send a full power shield into his face!! After that move, regardless of the outcome, she would spin her body extremely fast and kick Komastu away quickly like she was taught. This Flash Spirit was obviously stronger than Komastu's own but that's only because he wasn't powered up. After she would do it, she let off that childish smile. "Yes! I did it! I did ittttt!" she said prancing around like an idiot in a sense. She pointed her fingers up, feeling really cocky about herself. "I'm number one, I'm number one!" she said. The Saiyaness clearly didn't even see if she was successful or not. She did her motions right though!
The Saiyaness was very hyper but it was something she just did all on her own.. She wasn't trying to be too annoying. She was just trying to be happy for Komastu. She wanted to let him know somehow that him simply being there with her just made her day a million times better. Rather Koma understood that or not didn't matter though. What did matter was that the little Saiyaness could smile about it and proudly admit that her cousin was the best family member ever! Would he be soon though?
WC: 500 WCT: 3,500
[OT-2] Rebellion Spear - 1,200,176 PL!
Last Edit: Apr 27, 2017 17:58:40 GMT -5 by Deleted
Post by King of All on Apr 26, 2017 20:31:06 GMT -5
"I wouldn't get too excited if I were you, my base form still, HURTS" He growled as he slammed into Mitsuba with all of his current strength. It did wonders as it knocked the young saiyaness but didn't do nearly enough damage to even knock her off balance! He supposed that was a great testament to just how strong Mitsuba had become. It was also really good for his own psyche, a smirk crossing his face as he realized that his strength wasn't all that he was making it out to be... he was powerful but it wasn't like he was going to break people just by sparring... it would take him going full out to...
"OOF" Mitsuba quickly retaliated by using the very Rebellion Spear he had just displayed! Knocking into him with such an incredible force it knocked the older saiyan off his feet and sent him crashing into the wall. Thankfully, Kyuri had been the one to design this ship and did so with Super Saiyan 3s in mind. He grunted as he rubbed the back of his head, picking himself up as he looked up to Mitsuba who was bouncing around again.
Well he had been about to compliment her... but she wasn't taking this seriously! No one EVER took him seriously! Even Jarvis didn't as he blew up the planet he was supposed to protect!!
"Tsh..." He grit his teeth tightly, taking in a few deep breaths to keep himself in control of his own thoughts. He could hear the distant whispers of his inner darkness calling him to act on his hatred and anger, just barely resisting it's dark temptations on his own. He glanced back up to Mitsuba and decided now would be the perfect time to teach her the next technique... How to keep voices out of your god damned head!
<That means you... shut up... damn it leave me alone...> Komatsu mentally growled at his inner demons. It had become difficult for him to distinguish the sorcerer from his own evil desires... He didn't want to admit to himself that he couldn't handle this power...
"I told you to stay focused. Stop that, sit down for the next part. I don't have telepathy but grandma did create these devices to replicate telepathy... to an extent. Here..." Komatsu reached into his pocket, having come prepared for this training. He retrieved two tiny circular devices. He handed one to Mitsuba while he placed the other against his temple. It just stuck there like it was already covered in glue. He would wait for Mitsuba to take hers before showing her how and where to put it on.
<Can you hear me? And PLEASE don't be loud, you're talking directly into my head...> He pleaded with the young saiyaness quietly, giving her a mock glare as he waited for her answer.
<The next technique you're going to learn is how to keep people out of your head. So close your eyes and focus. You can hear my voice directly in your thoughts so you need to focus on how to get it out. Personally, I imagine a large brick wall around myself whenever I feel anyone's trying to link with my mind.> Komatsu began to explain, standing in front of her with arms crossed. He didn't show it, but he was actually aching all over after that attack... his body just craved the power of his super saiyan form to relieve him... but he held it at bay... at least for now...
Mitsuba felt so freakin' good to do this! She was kicking her bigger cousin's booty which made her feel so optimistic over herself. As she looked over, her cousin was against the wall. At first she gasped, reaching a hand out... "Koma!" she said in a worried tone but as soon as he came out and brushing it off... The saiyaness sighed with relief and smiled at him, resting a hand on her waist. He looked a little mad but she simply giggled at him. "Awwww... Kommy couldn't handle his little cussy?" she said with a giggle and even blew him a kiss to kinda taunt him in a sense. Komastu would go straight towards the next part of training though...
He tosses her a little device and she catches it, tilting her head. "What is this?" she asked her older cousin as he began to explain. It was a little device that their grandmother made. She gave him a smile, nodding. "Pfffft... Nanny makes the best stuff!" she said as she applied the device on her head. That was when she could hear Komastu in her head which got her excited... She quickly sat down and closed her eyes... Blocking everything physically out.
'OH YES! YESSS! I CAN HEAR YOU! CAN YOU HEAR ME?!' she shouted in their communication. Clearly, she didn't listen well... If Komastu would look in her brain, she would have interesting thoughts in play... It was actually a lot of memories of her as a little girl... Mainly being hyper around Kyuri as a girl but if Koma looked carefully... He would see a window... A window where Nasu beat up the poor girl.. Mitsuba only six was crying as he simply harassed her and bullied her. This would probably make Komastu so mad. More images were around like this in her head but were distant.
Meanwhile... Mitsuba could see what was going on with Koma's head... Her brain sensing his and how scary and messed up the consciousness was. She began tearing up physically, "K-Koma...?" she said... Koma instructed her to block this out... Pffft... She quickly did so whenever she had the chance! With her ki, she quickly shut down connections! Mitsuba ripped her headpiece off and quickly threw it against the wall and shattered it. Her eyes tearing up for feeling really worried for her big cousin. Those horrific inner demons... Everything!
"K-Koma! Are you okay?! Please! Don't be scared! I'm here for you..." she whimpered as she would attempt to reach out quickly and attempt to hug her cousin. The bright side of all this training was... she learned two of the important moves and... she knew more about Koma without realizing what was wrong. "Please! I love you, big cousin! Don't feel this way~!! I won't let you get mad!" she said, trying to hug him at least to sooth him but she was probably about to make this much worse for herself... Koma would probably be mad right now...
Post by King of All on Apr 27, 2017 19:30:57 GMT -5
<I Just told you not to yell!> Komatsu mentally growled at her! He glared at her intensely as he brought his hand up to his head as if he had just been mentally assaulted by his little cousin! Oh he hated having people in his head, but damn it they were always getting in there, even with this technique it was hard to block them out, especially with the Majin mark.
As Mitsuba peeked into his mind she would see images of the struggle happening within him. She would see flashes of him losing to Nasu and to Jarvis, or the dead bodies of the saiyans he had failed. She would see images of him clinging to the power the majin mark offered, even of him seeming to sell his soul to a shaded devil for even more strength. They were all quick flashes, but the message they portrayed would easily be picked up by Mitsuba as she peered into his mind. When he noticed her worried expression he yanked the piece from his head and tossed it to the floor.
"I didn't say to look into my head I said block me out!" Now he looked angry... like legitimately angry! His body was slowly began to cover itself in red fur. His hair seemed to shorten but spike out more than usual and red markings appeared under his eyes as his power level was quickly rising out of control. Sure it had been an accident, a side effect of the technology Kyuri had given them but he wasn't thinking straight. He felt completely exposed and the worst part of it? She pitied him...
Oh he knew that look in her eyes... Nasu had those same eyes... Jarvis too and even his parents who tried to show him so much love... they all just pitied and looked down on him. Damn it who was she to judge him! He reached forward and grabbed Mitsuba's collar angrily, opening his mouth to yell at her but promptly shutting again. It would be clear that he was still struggling against himself, and Mitsuba's hug was definitely not making it better.
"How can I not feel this way!? How can I not grab for whatever power I can get my hands on?! So many people depend on me and I can't let them down! I don't need you pitying me! Damn it Mitsuba get off me!" He growled, shifting his hand from his hold on her collar to shove her away from him. Seconds before his hand hit her he realized how bad of an idea it was, but it was far too late to stop the motion now.
Outside the training room...
"Can you sense that?"
"Yeah... something's wrong... He shouldn't need to be using that power against Mitsuba... I"
"Hurry up and go! Both of you!" Satsu yelled at both of them, pointing towards the exit. She could handle things here while they dealt with Komatsu.
Kyuri and Toru looked at each other with worried expressions before darting out of the command center. This was definitely something they had seen before... Nasu had hospitalized both Karota and Miso with this power... and now that Komatsu had it, Mitsuba was the one in his way.
WC: 542
Komastu shoves Mitsuba with the force of 4,906,925 PL!
Last Edit: Apr 27, 2017 20:42:09 GMT -5 by Deleted
Mitsuba was successful hugging her big cousin. She felt so scared for him... She just wanted him to be safe! However, she realized now... This was her undoing.. The collar of her shirt was suddenly gripped. His grip was so strong that she could hear the material in her shirt rip a bit! She tried to keep him steady close with her hug. Suddenly, tears dripping down her cheek from her being so worried about him. Even in the Super Saiyan state she was in couldn't handle this mighty power! She tried so hard not to let her tears and sadness overcome her! She wasn't weak like this! Not anymore! Biting her teeth down hard she screamed at Komastu. "K-KOMA... LET GO! YOU'RE STARTING TO GET TOO ROUGH! PLEASE!" she shouted clearly actually taking on this experience.
For a girl who didn't like to fight was taking this very well. She slammed her eyes shut, trying to not to panic. Her morale was so strong... But she didn't worry about herself... She was worried about her cousin.. Her hug slowly started to loosen up, she began weeping while talking to him. "Komastu...! Please... Don't feel like that... We look at you because w-we love you...! GAH~! WE DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING LIKE THAT FROM YOU! L-LET GO OF ME!" she shouted. She loosened her hug and finally released him as he demanded her to let go... Mitsuba was starting to feel scared officially now... She didn't want to swing on her cousin because she knew it would make things worse... So like with Nasu... She accepted this. Being the poor, little Mitsuba... She took the beating once more. She shouted one final time, "PLEASE LET GO! DON'T BE LIKE HIM! I-I LO-" WHAM!
Meanwhile...
Nemesis had her fair time of being bored... She would lean against the hallway's door to let the two train themselves. She couldn't tell what was going on at the time but she assumed everything was going as procedure on training. 'I'm really impressed with that kid... I think she'll go beyond what I ever did... I just hope Komastu trains her better than how that idiot Nasu did with me!' she thought to herself... Rubbing her horns, suddenly she felt the halls shake a bit. "What the..?!" realizing the source came from the training room. "Damn that kid must have a lot more power than I thought! She's surely got muscle!" and while saying so walked towards the door. However, she was sensing something bad... Her eyes widen underneath as she ran through the door... Nemesis gasped!
Mitsuba... had been shoved very hard into the wall... Her eyes slammed shut while the rest of her body rapidly shook... Her torso straight and her arms and legs hanging... Nemesis shouted so damn loud, "MITSUBA?!?!" running towards the poor girl. She quickly halted herself in front of her and gently pulled her off the wall. Her nerves were acting violent all across. Her entire body quaked... Nemesis seemed shocked as she gently lowered her on the ground... Her body didn't even feel right to hold.
Nemesis was so furious... This fucking kid... Komastu... He left Mitsuba in this fatal state! She turned towards her cousin (which she was unaware about) and shouted on the top of her lungs once more. "KOMASTU!!! YOU STUPID FUCK!!!!!!!!!" she screamed. She went on with the rant! "YOU JUST HARMED THE MOST INNOCENT GIRL I'VE HONESTLY MET! You fucking.... ignorant... scumbag! H-How could you?!" she yelled towards him... She tried so hard not to snap but it just happened... Nemesis kneel over, checking on Mitsuba... "Ah shit! Mitsuba please honey... stay with me!"
WC: 610 WCT: 4,610
Mitsuba suffers a broken spine... Alive... but barely.
Last Edit: Apr 27, 2017 22:37:23 GMT -5 by Deleted
Post by King of All on Apr 27, 2017 21:45:12 GMT -5
His extended hand was shaking violently, his eyes wide as he heard the sickening crunch of Mitsuba's back as he shoved her against the wall so forcefully he broke it. All he could do was stare, looking shocked at what he'd just done...
"M...Mitsu... I didn't... I didn't mean..." He took a step away from her as Nemesis came charging into the training room, rushing to Mitsuba's side and gently placing her on the ground. She looked dead to him... he could barely see her breath and was too freaked out to sense for her energy. Nemesis berated him for hurting her and silently he agreed with every word she said, how could he do that? That hadn't been him... 'Oh it was you, and you know it. All of this new strength, it's making you one hell of a killing machine! Haha no stupid weakling is going to stand in your way!' He heard his own voice echoing in his head, causing him to wince as his hands suddenly flew up to the sides of his head as he continued to step backwards away from the two sisters.
"I... I'm sorry... Help her...' He groaned audibly this time as his eyes suddenly became red and his grunt turned into a cry! His power started to surge again and this time, Komatsu didn't have direct control over it... Thankfully, a powerful punch to his face temporarily snapped him out of it. There stood Toru, more furious than Koma had ever seen him before! It took a lot to get Toru angry, but here he stood, about ready to kill Komatsu right then!
"Mom! Take her to the med bay NOW" Toru called out to Kyuri who had come soaring in her own full powered Super Saiyan form. She landed next to Mitsuba with a panicked look on her face. She didn't dare move her in her condition...
"Can you help me carry her... we need to make sure we don't move her back too much... she's still breathing but barely." Kyuri asked of Nemesis, the palm of her hand opening up as a needle popped out and struck Mitsuba, injecting her with a healing liquid that would start stabilizing her for transport.
In the mean time, Toru didn't wait for Komatsu to explain himself. so furious with the saiyan he was throwing one punch after the next at his nephew!
" I don't want any god damned excuses Koma! You know damn well it's that Mark! I think it's about time you let the damn thing go before you end up exactly like Jarvis! Going after all that power until you start reaching for godhood! You, IDIOT." He growled angrily, throwing a punch for Komatsu's face.
The younger saiyan blocked every hit his uncle had to throw at him but never countered. That shocked expression he had moments ago changed back to one of anger as he fought against his uncle. His eyes went red once more as his anger and hatred took over, controlling his every move as Komatsu resigned himself to start avidly fighting against the corruption of the Majin Mark...
WC: 524 Komatsu is breaking free of the majin mark!
The Kold Demon Sorcerer was currently going over some of the older scrolls from Nakiya's library when he felt a tingle in the base of his mind. He frowned for a moment before he closed his eyes and homed in on the source of the disturbance. "Ah, that explains it." mused Abzerute as he realised that the Saiyan boy Komatsu was trying to break free of the Mark he'd given him. He was surprised that the Saiyan hadn't already tried to do so before now, given his family's little history and all with dark magic and their connections and such.
Abzerute pondered for a moment about how best to approach this as he made his way over to his observation stone, mostly to appraise himself of what was going on with his little monkey puppet. The Mark may allow him to empower, communicate and manipulate his minions, but it didn't allow him to search their minds histories... thankfully, the original sorcerer had left behind some tools for this exact purpose. After inspecting what had transpired, the Kold Demon believed he had the best route to take with the boy.
He reached forth with his mind to contact the boy across the dimensional gap between them. <Well, it's been a while since we last spoke with one another Komatsu. Congratulations I believe are in order since I can no longer sense Jarvis' presence in the universe. And apparently you're taking over the reigns of your Saiyan Alliance... a well earned promotion of that I have no doubt.> said Abzerute towards Komatsu as he leaned back in his chair, observing the boy through the viewing sphere.
<But, we both know that death is not the final solution that many would think it is, now don't we?> he inquired rhetorically. <So why try to remove the power that you accepted in order to destroy Jarvis the first time hmm?> asked Abzerute even though he already could guess the answer from having hit the rewind button a couple of times. <Your comrades well-being I presume? Very noble of you I'm sure... but, if you think this will solve your issues, I'm afraid your comrades are mistaken.> he said, before he gave a telepathic sigh.
<I suppose it's understandable since they don't know the exact details of what the Mark does. The Kaioshin don't exactly like anyone using this power, so they've kept any and all knowledge of it repressed... but, given your situation, would you like to know what exactly this power I've given you actually does?> asked Abzerute. <Whether you believe me or not is of course entirely your decision.> he added, well aware that suspicion was probably already in the boys mind regarding the Kold Demon.
<You know that the Mark increases your power, and it helps to unlock your next level of power... and by now you've felt your anger, rage etcetera peaking more often than before. The magic in the Mark amplifies what's already there. Your rage, your hatred, your frustrations, your anger... those are yours and yours alone. The Mark simply brings them more to the surface than you would normally allow them to.> explained Abzerute, rather calmly about the whole thing.
<So yes, if you remove the Mark, you won't be as prone to outbursts like you just had... but those emotions will still be there. Lingering. Waiting to be brought forth once more...> he said, before he decided to offer the boy a ray of hope for his little conscious. <There is a way however for you to have your cake and eat it, as the expression goes. Assuming you believe me of course.> offered Abzerute.
<You're familiar with Earth by now, as well as the home of the Kami who was your sister at one point correct?> he inquired of the boy. <Well, in that place is a special liquid known as the Sacred Holy Water. As you can imagine from a name like that, it is filled with goodness. If you were to drink that water, then you'd be able to mitigate the amplified darkness inside of yourself. You'd be able to keep the Mark and its power, without feeling like you're about to explode if someone so much as looks at you wrong...> the Kold Demon explained, before he dropped the catch to this too good to be true offer.
<That is if you survive of course. The water isn't exactly... pleasant to drink for anyone not of divine blood. Even your eldest sister felt incredible pain from consuming this water.> he said, assuming that the previous Kami had no doubt drunk the water during her tenure as Earth's Guardian. <But, if you survive drinking the Sacred Water... you'd be back to your old self again. Although, it's not a permanent fix. You will need to keep yourself disciplined from that point onwards, learn to keep your emotions in proper check...> Abzerute explained, wondering if the boy would consider what he'd said.
The Kold Demon Sorcerer didn't rightly know if Komatsu drinking the Sacred Water wouldn't remove the Mark from him, since nobody had ever had the Mark on them when they'd drunk from the stuff. All he knew for certain was that it would be extremely painful for the Saiyan, quite possibly put him into a zenkai state if he manages to survive the process... which would be a very nice little jump start for the Kold Demon Sorcerer of course.
<Right now, you are the only one with the power and will to stand against Jarvis when he returns to the living realm. Your eldest brother is off playing King and could honestly give less of a rats backside. Your eldest sister has vanished from the face of creation. Your half-sister... well, we both know she's not strong enough yet. None of your forces have anywhere near your strength, and none of the Kaioshin have the power to face him either. Only you do... with the help of that Mark.> said Abzerute, reinforcing his point.
<I'll give you an offer... if you keep the Mark, and survive drinking the Sacred Holy Water, I will do what I can to reign in some of the darker amplifications of the Mark on your emotions. It will make for an interesting exercise for the both of us...> he offered, before he considered something that would probably tip Komatsu towards his favour. <I'll even sweeten the deal, by giving you some information that you may wish to know about, concerning the Demon Queen who Jarvis holds as an ally, the same one who turned your eldest sister for a while... do we have a deal?> asked Abzerute, letting the offer hang in the metaphorical air between the two of them.
If Komatsu agreed to his arrangement, Abzerute would give him this information. <The Demon Queen has an agent on Namek, seeking the Namekian Dragon Balls and trying to influence the Guru that resides there. She may be trying to hasten Jarvis' return... I think we can both agree that that would not be in anyone's best interests.> he would tell Komatsu, if the boy agreed to his offer of information. If Komatsu did not agree, then he wouldn't tell him about the Demon Queen's activities on Namek.
Nemesis gave the Saiyan a snarl, "Damn you, Komastu... If I was much stronger I'd personally kick your ass!" Honestly, the reason why Nemesis didn't bother doing anything was the fact she'd easily end up with the same fate as Mitsuba... Looking down at the ground, she kneels down and tries hard not to let any emotion to control her. She softly whispered to herself as Mitsuba's nerves were slowly easing itself, "My god... How the fuck could this prick do this to you?" that was then help finally arrived. Toru, the girl's father had been ready to kill the boy! Leena wish she could... Oh how much she would love to do that right now...
While the Saiyaness had her own mark, she was easy to control it. Mumbling under her breath, she would watch as Kyuri would arrive. The woman injected a liquid into her which made Nemesis almost furious because she wished no one to tamper with Mitsuba but what little choice did she have? Nemesis sighed lightly, worried about the young girl as Kyuri asked to help her carry her out of here. Nemesis nodded and knew exactly what to do. "Alright..." was all Nemesis said as she grabbed Mitsuba's arms and pulled them out and pointing up. She would allow her arms to tightly come together and allow her head to stand perfectly straight, causing her to not move back too much. This was knowledgeable from the small skirmishes she did during her Empire days. This method was to avoid soldiers with disabled backs from becoming parapalegic. She motioned Kyuri to grab her from the waist down and if this was organized well, Nemesis would lift her from the top spine area up. Luckily, Mitsuba was a tiny figure so lifting her was cake but her body felt so awkward... Her spine was all fucked up which made Nemesis panicked in her mind.
She felt so bad for this poor girl. Nemesis knew what it was like getting badly beaten up like this. The poor girl's eyes seemed shut hard like she was still conscious but they all knew she was knocked out cold. She had to be. She probably was hit hard behind her head too... The girl would be feeling a lot of pain right now if she was still up... Poor Mitsuba...
WC: 390 WCT: 5,000
Leaving my part here! PL please with my weight bonus! Also now in Soy School INT! Annnnd I know FPSSJ
Last Edit: Apr 29, 2017 10:25:41 GMT -5 by Deleted
Post by King of All on Apr 30, 2017 20:35:07 GMT -5
The sudden appearance of Abzerute's voice in his head caused Komatsu's eyes to grow wide, distracting him from the punch that crashed into his jaw and sent him into the floor. He had to bring his arms up to defend himself as Toru descended on him, punching him again while he was down and grabbing the front of his shirt, much like he had done to Mitsuba, and yelled at him while keeping him pinned. His uncles words would fall on deaf ears however as he was more focused on the battle that was waging inside of him.
Abzerute was boring to listen too... formal like some sort of nobleman... but at least he was finally getting around to telling him about the mark. For a moment Komatsu considered simply pushing him out of his head thanks to the Soy School technique, but he hesitated. He wanted to know everything about the mark, and Abzerute was telling him. Mind you he didn't particularly like what the sorcerer was telling him. He remained silent as he listened, his mind going crazy with the possibilities and all the 'what if' scenarios he could encounter.
<I don't trust you, not in the slightest. I have no reason to believe any of what you're telling me... I'm not keeping this damned thing... it makes me stronger, but at the cost of hurting my family, and the entire Alliance is my family. I won't risk this any longer... if what you say is true about the Sacred Holy Water, then I"ll seek it out on my own. I"ll purge myself from this crap that makes me a threat to my family and I'll train to become strong enough to fight Jarvis on my own, without you!~> He mentally growled at Abzerute. Outwardly Komatsu's hands would fly up to his temple, groaning in pain as he was forcefully pushing the mark away and breaking free.
<I don't give a rats ass about the Demon Queen... not right now, but how about I make you my own deal? You get the hell out of my head now, but don't go too far. I can feel my energy draining after a battle with this mark on me, so I know that you somehow benefit from this, right? Well then why don't we keep this our secret. If ever a situation comes up where I need this power, where I need to face Jarvis again or my brother, then I will call you and allow you to mark me once more, reaping whatever benefits you might gain from it. This way, I focus my anger towards my enemies and not towards the ones I care about.
I mean otherwise, I push you out right now and never let you back into my head again!> Komatsu counter offered. Outwardly he would cringe and try rolling over onto his side, curling up with his hands tightly pressed against his head. Toru let up a little bit at this point, seeing as Komatsu wasn't fighting him back and clearly not hearing him. It was a huge relief whenever Komatsu would power down. The only issue was that M still on his forehead, though it was quickly fading away...
Meanwhile...
Kyuri was extremely careful with Mitsuba, making sure to not move her back more than she had too. With Nemesis' help however it was easy to carry the girl to the medical bay where she gently placed Mitsuba down into a flat medical pod and placed her inside. She had redesigned this pod from the Advanced medical machine she had once built on the Star Javelin, chosing this lying down design for more than one reason.
WC: 615 Abzerute -Koma will still break the mark but is proposing a secret, personal, alliance with Abzerute -
Last Edit: May 1, 2017 14:47:39 GMT -5 by King of All
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