Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2016 14:52:38 GMT -5
Saki’s spirit now fell from the check-in station, down deep deep deep into a large mountain area. Saki as a cloud landed right by the blood pond (So this is the blood pond…sounds like fun to swim in) He said to himself as he looked around. There were oni everywhere and saki walked up to one. “Excuse me sir, is this where the evils that don’t get reincarnated go?” The oni looked at the puff cloud. “Yes it is you little demon you. Now we have plenty of things to do. First we’re going to take a field trip to the DMV down here. It’s the first place spirits go. Now where is that bus?” Soon saki’s spirit saw more and more spirits coming, “Where is this?” Saki asked until he saw the big sign which was called the bus stop.
The spirit clouds came and the oni spoke. “Everyone get into a line, we’re going to the DMV so you can see a place in hell. It’s a field trip for all you evil souls to see what we do down here.” Soon a sound was heard and a bus pulled up, the door opening and showing a green skinned Oni. “Alright!” The Oni bus driver yelled. “Everyone in the bus!” With the main oni standing by the open bus door, all the spirits piled in, taking a seat. The oni went into the bus after all the clouds went in and the door closed.
“Alright, everyone here?” The main oni asked? Everyone spoke and said their names, the oni checking it off on a clipboard. Saki looked around, wondering why they had to give their names. He then said. “My name is saki and I just got down here.” The oni with a clipboard then looked for the name saki, going up and down the list until he was frustrated. “We don’t have a saki written down for this trip…you said you just got down here….hrm…alright.” The oni with a clip board then wrote saki’s name under the list of spirits present and nodded. “Alright! Time to leave!” The oni bus driver then started the engine and before long the bus was off. Saki sat in the bus, wondering what this DMV was. A spirit beside him spoke. “It’s the Department of Motor Veicules and it’s a bad place…” Saki replied to the cloud. “How bad?” The spirit beside saki replied now. “The line ups are so long, there’s so many forms to fill out and the staff there are horrid. They go on break and lunch when ever they want!” Saki now spoke. “Who works there?” The spirit cloud beside him spoke. “The younger Onis work there…there snobs and don’t like their jobs so they take it out on the people that come there!”
Saki was scared now. He didn’t have his body, he got on a bus with souls and they were heading to the Department of Motor Veicules. “Why do they even have a place like this down here? We don’t drive, we don’t even have hands, arms, legs or even a body!” The oni with the clipboard shouted. “Quiet down back there! We will turn this bus around if you don’t behave!”
Saki didn’t know what was worst, being dead, being without a body, going to some DMV for a visit or heading back to the blood pond…he just kept his mouth quiet and rolled with it.
The bus now was going on a bumpy road and the seats began to jump. Most of the souls screamed and were scared but saki was fine, he just wanted to see this place, as he never stepped into a building called the DMV in the living world, he wondered what it would be like.
Soon the bus was getting closer, the bus driver got on the intercom. “Hello fellow souls, we’re 4 minutes away from the DMV, now the cloud your sitting beside is your buddy. You and your buddy will stay with the group and not get lost.” Saki looked at the cloud to his right. “Looks like we’re buddies for now.” He said to the cloud.
Saki looked out the window as he looked at HELL, their were people actually training in hell…people with bodies. Saki wanted to get his body back as soon as possible but first he had to deal with this ‘trip’. He now looked to his front, staring at the seat ahead of him as the bus now pulled in to the entrance of the DMV.
The bus kept going then went to park in a spot especially for field trips in hell. The bus stopped and the Oni with a clipboard yelled. “Everyone out! Single file! Lets go!” All of the souls now floated out of their seats and filed off the bus, standing beside it as the lead Oni came out with his clipboard. “Now all of you, follow me!” The lead Oni yelled as he walked to the door which had two Oni standing infront of it on either side. Saki floated with his cloud ‘buddy’ to the door which the oni were guarding. The crane master wondered why there was so much security. (Wow, Yemma doesn’t take risks, this place is locked down tight...these oni have to be strong to deal with souls, as well as people with bodies down here…)
The two onis at the door opened it for the lead oni and the class of spirits to enter behind him. When they got in, it was a humbling experience.
People were in lines, screaming and shouting at each other while waiting, the lines were really long, this DMV being a big building in otherworld. The lead oni took them from the entrance and had them look at the lines. There was one for licence renewal, one for getting a licence, one for paying fines related to the DMV and another line where people were getting handed forms to fill out, being told to go sit down and work on filling out the forms. The oni then walked with the cloud group to the room where photos were being taken. They saw a line of 12 people going to get their picture taken, each having a form. He then saw the one at the front of the line, the oni said. “Sorry, you filled out the wrong form….get back into line a and get the right form, fill it out and come back after it’s done.” The man yelled and started cursing out the oni worker hard. Soon 2 buff onis came in and subdued the man, one got behind him and got him into a lock, the lock made him sleepy and the man passed out; the two onis taking him away.
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The spirit clouds came and the oni spoke. “Everyone get into a line, we’re going to the DMV so you can see a place in hell. It’s a field trip for all you evil souls to see what we do down here.” Soon a sound was heard and a bus pulled up, the door opening and showing a green skinned Oni. “Alright!” The Oni bus driver yelled. “Everyone in the bus!” With the main oni standing by the open bus door, all the spirits piled in, taking a seat. The oni went into the bus after all the clouds went in and the door closed.
“Alright, everyone here?” The main oni asked? Everyone spoke and said their names, the oni checking it off on a clipboard. Saki looked around, wondering why they had to give their names. He then said. “My name is saki and I just got down here.” The oni with a clipboard then looked for the name saki, going up and down the list until he was frustrated. “We don’t have a saki written down for this trip…you said you just got down here….hrm…alright.” The oni with a clip board then wrote saki’s name under the list of spirits present and nodded. “Alright! Time to leave!” The oni bus driver then started the engine and before long the bus was off. Saki sat in the bus, wondering what this DMV was. A spirit beside him spoke. “It’s the Department of Motor Veicules and it’s a bad place…” Saki replied to the cloud. “How bad?” The spirit beside saki replied now. “The line ups are so long, there’s so many forms to fill out and the staff there are horrid. They go on break and lunch when ever they want!” Saki now spoke. “Who works there?” The spirit cloud beside him spoke. “The younger Onis work there…there snobs and don’t like their jobs so they take it out on the people that come there!”
Saki was scared now. He didn’t have his body, he got on a bus with souls and they were heading to the Department of Motor Veicules. “Why do they even have a place like this down here? We don’t drive, we don’t even have hands, arms, legs or even a body!” The oni with the clipboard shouted. “Quiet down back there! We will turn this bus around if you don’t behave!”
Saki didn’t know what was worst, being dead, being without a body, going to some DMV for a visit or heading back to the blood pond…he just kept his mouth quiet and rolled with it.
The bus now was going on a bumpy road and the seats began to jump. Most of the souls screamed and were scared but saki was fine, he just wanted to see this place, as he never stepped into a building called the DMV in the living world, he wondered what it would be like.
Soon the bus was getting closer, the bus driver got on the intercom. “Hello fellow souls, we’re 4 minutes away from the DMV, now the cloud your sitting beside is your buddy. You and your buddy will stay with the group and not get lost.” Saki looked at the cloud to his right. “Looks like we’re buddies for now.” He said to the cloud.
Saki looked out the window as he looked at HELL, their were people actually training in hell…people with bodies. Saki wanted to get his body back as soon as possible but first he had to deal with this ‘trip’. He now looked to his front, staring at the seat ahead of him as the bus now pulled in to the entrance of the DMV.
The bus kept going then went to park in a spot especially for field trips in hell. The bus stopped and the Oni with a clipboard yelled. “Everyone out! Single file! Lets go!” All of the souls now floated out of their seats and filed off the bus, standing beside it as the lead Oni came out with his clipboard. “Now all of you, follow me!” The lead Oni yelled as he walked to the door which had two Oni standing infront of it on either side. Saki floated with his cloud ‘buddy’ to the door which the oni were guarding. The crane master wondered why there was so much security. (Wow, Yemma doesn’t take risks, this place is locked down tight...these oni have to be strong to deal with souls, as well as people with bodies down here…)
The two onis at the door opened it for the lead oni and the class of spirits to enter behind him. When they got in, it was a humbling experience.
People were in lines, screaming and shouting at each other while waiting, the lines were really long, this DMV being a big building in otherworld. The lead oni took them from the entrance and had them look at the lines. There was one for licence renewal, one for getting a licence, one for paying fines related to the DMV and another line where people were getting handed forms to fill out, being told to go sit down and work on filling out the forms. The oni then walked with the cloud group to the room where photos were being taken. They saw a line of 12 people going to get their picture taken, each having a form. He then saw the one at the front of the line, the oni said. “Sorry, you filled out the wrong form….get back into line a and get the right form, fill it out and come back after it’s done.” The man yelled and started cursing out the oni worker hard. Soon 2 buff onis came in and subdued the man, one got behind him and got him into a lock, the lock made him sleepy and the man passed out; the two onis taking him away.
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