Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2016 18:40:37 GMT -5
@mizuna @motet @daeva
Ok so im trying to improve my writing, and make it more enjoyable for you guys to read! To further this end i would very much like some critique and feedback on my writing so far?
What am I doing right? What am I doing wrong? Don't worry bout hurting my feelings or anything, really just wanna try use suggestions to improve ma writing! I would VERY much also like opinion of those that i've rped with if the don't mind giving it sice well they know my writing first hand!
Thanks in advance you guys!
Ok so im trying to improve my writing, and make it more enjoyable for you guys to read! To further this end i would very much like some critique and feedback on my writing so far?
What am I doing right? What am I doing wrong? Don't worry bout hurting my feelings or anything, really just wanna try use suggestions to improve ma writing! I would VERY much also like opinion of those that i've rped with if the don't mind giving it sice well they know my writing first hand!
Thanks in advance you guys!
