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Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
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On the day following the battle in the arena, at night, Nasu ordered Private Cabba to send a message to both Lieutenant Colonel Jie Shan Lan Dian and Major Komatsu. The two super saiyans were supposed to be meeting the Overseer at the Soy Training Hall at first light, so that they could finish their training under the Soy School of Martial Arts. Although there was no “order” in the message, it was pretty much implied. Nasu had been quite adamant about getting them to top form so that they could harvest their fullest potential and become complete warriors, or at least something close to that in a sense. Mastering a martial arts was something he deemed necessary for his inner circle of trusted warriors and friends, although the last word was something Nasu would never admit; he was too closed for that.
On the following day, the young Overseer arrived at the training dojo with holographic walls about twenty minutes before the first light. He configured the environment to show just Planet Natto’s natural plains, as he didn’t want it to take away the focus they would need in order to learn the final technique of the fighting style along with the ultimate skill, the one capable of harvesting the ultimate potential of those saiyans who would choose to fight together as a team, a squad, or even a family. Miso was already there, as he was thrilled to watch such a training. It would be the two previous rivals, teaming up together against Nasu at full strength and that was something that would be interesting to say the least! Would the two of them, especially Komatsu, be able to cast aside the bitter taste of their rivalry at the arena and, in the case of the later, the bitterness of defeat? That question would be crucial to how well they would fare against the Overseer.
– You don’t waste any time, do you? Heh! – Miso asked in his conceited and slightly annoying usual tone. Nasu stared at him with a serious expression. – There’s no time to waste, General. They may have ascended, but they are still incomplete warriors, technique-wise, and they don’t even control their super saiyan form yet. – Nasu said. – But Komatsu managed to reach Second Grade, you have to give him some credit! Hehehehe! – he laughed a bit, but Nasu grunted. – Second Grade isn’t the same as harnessing the full power of the super saiyan form. I want them in top form, General! That’s not something that I would like them to do, it’s something they must do! Not only for their personal glory and accomplishment, but for this Alliance too! – Nasu was annoyed by Miso like always, but there was some fiery determination in his tone. The saiyan General just chuckled a bit more but didn’t say a single word.
And then Nasu waited for the two warriors to arrive, so that they could start their ultimate and final training as students of the Soy School.
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First light, thought Jie Shan tiredly. Just who the Hell wanted to train at first light? And especially the day after an arena match that nearly ended with someone dying? Still, Jie Shan reminded himself, it would be good to continue his training in the Soy Arts. The Soy Arts had certainly given him a bit of an edge during the arena match he had had with Captain -Major now, he reminded himself- Komatsu. Of course, Jie Shan had been of an equal standing in the school with Komatsu, so perhaps the advantage had been moot.
Even as he rose, Jie Shan was just a little bit tired. That match had been... exhilarating. First, he'd nearly been killed by the young Saiyan. That in itself had been unpleasant. Even now, Jie Shan thought about it and it set his heart to beating a little more quickly. Being so close to death was a rather unpleasant experience, and not one that he was eager to repeat. But it had ultimately led to his ascension to Super Saiyan, easily his favorite thing to come out of the whole situation.
And, he supposed, he was counselor now. Which was well and all, as he was more than happy to help serve the Alliance in the best way he could. Though, he had to worry if his new position would cut into his training and drinking time. And not to mention, he'd still have to make time to file reports for that Kinoko girl... Damn, he thought, he was just finding more and more work to add to the pile. He needed a secretary or something. That's what important people did, right? He'd seen his father, who was a lower rank than him, pass off work to his subordinates before. He was almost certain he could find a corporal or the like to take some of the work from his plate.
Jie Shan continued to make his way to the training hall, flying at a leisurely pace. He felt so... light. He was finally free of that damnable weighted armor his father had made him wear. He simply had no need for it any longer. It had gotten to the point where the armor was more of a hindrance than help. And Jie Shan did not mind that one bit. That armor had always hurt his back. Screw that, he thought, and screw his father. His father... That man was sure to call Jie Shan for a meeting soon. Probably to discuss his legacy. Or something like that. Jie Shan loathed the idea of it.
But it mattered not for now, for Jie Shan had finally arrived at the Soy Training Hall. Quickly, he descended from his flight and touched down on the ground nearby. It was not long before he had managed to make his way inside and his eyes quickly scanned the insides, looking with great interest all about him. The plains, he realized, how... plain. Jie Shan chuckled to himself, but quickly shook his head and looked about for the Overseer. And soon, his eyes fell on him.
"Ah, Overseer," he called out, "I got your message from Cabba last night, and I'm ready to begin training."
Jie Shan quickly noticed the OVerseer's companion, and raised his hand in greeting. "And good morning to you, Counselor Miso."
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Post by King of All on Mar 22, 2016 10:52:03 GMT -5
To say that Komatsu was fully healed was a huge lie. Physically, yes, his wounds of the previous day's fight were gone, his bones had been mended, but exhaustion still gripped at the boy's very core. he had taped into a ridiculous amount of power during their fight. He had let himself get beaten down to summon up his zenkai, and used every ounce of his fighting spirit to fight.
"Man... Such a pain in the ass... I still can't even get a good nights sleep." Komatsu grumbled to himself as he would slip on his boots. His grandmother had brought him a change of clothes while he was in the healing chamber, but he was actually quite glad that she wasn't here when he woke up. He loved his grandmother, it was just... he didn't want anyone to be here, not even her. And he was definitely glad things had turned out that way.
He would push himself up to his feet once he was done getting dressed, stretching his arms from one side to the other to make sure that everything was back in place. Once he was satisfied with the condition his body was in, Komatsu inhaled deeply before he' walk out of the medical facility and start making his way towards the Soy School Dojo.
'I still can't believe I lost. I should of just beaten him before he ascended... aaarg but I guess it was fun while it lasted at least. I did want a fair fight and I suppose I got it…' His thoughts would wildly run over the events of the fight, where he had gone wrong, why he lost, it didn’t make any sense to him. When he ascended… he had been able to call on far more strength than Jie Shan… so how.
“Shit…” He would grumble as he walked. He didn’t bother taking flight towards the dojo, he was too tired and knowing Nasu, needed to conserve what energy he could manage to maintain.
“Maybe I’ll just ask for a leave…” Komatsu muttered to himself as he finally walked up to the Dojo. This was going to suck. In fact this whole thing sucked! At least he’d get to vent a little with whatever it was that Nasu had planned.
He walked up to the door and lazily pushed it open, stepping inside and immediately tensing up before he even knew who was inside. His eyes glanced up and locked onto Jie Shan’s back, then shifting his eyes over to Nasu, and then to Miso. He sighed lightly as he closed the door behind him.
The appearance of the Dojo was rather boring… the wastes, but it was a lot better than the lookout at least.
“Hey, sorry if i’m late.” He stated as he walked up to the others, his eyes shifting and resting on Jie Shan passively.
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
The first one to show up was Jie Shan. The hybrid’s crazy power could be sensed for afar and it was still annoying to Nasu how much stronger than him he was at base form. ”He is about a third stronger than me offensive-wise in his base form… But somehow this power isn’t applied to his defense and immediate reflexes. It’s odd. Saiyan-human hybrids, the most traditional case, are quite weaker than this elemi sort of people” he thought to himself. The new counselor and Lieutenant Colonel seemed well recovered from his battle on the previous day and that was good; he would be needing every ounce of strength he could harvest in order to withstand the final part of his martial arts training. At least he said he was ready for the training and Nasu nodded to that, then he spoke to Miso, who was standing there, outside the titled floor. The General of the Saiyan Alliance chuckled a bit and stared at the new super saiyan.
– Hey Counselor! Heh! Weird to be calling two breastfeeding babies both Overseer and Counselor, but go figures! Heh! Good luck in your training! I will pay you some booze after this, your victory made me rather rich yesterday! Hehehehe! – Miso had bet on Jie Shan and that made him hit a huge jackpot. He was obviously wasting all of his money with food and booze, but he hadn’t any other monetary ambition other than that; Miso liked the simple pleasures of life.
Shortly after Jie Shan’s arrival, Komatsu came through the door. His expression didn’t even try to deny that he was in a terrible mood and Nasu took notice of that but said nothing about it. Miso, on the other hand, would never lose an opportunity to tease his nephew and immediately began to chuckle again. – Hey maggot! Have some broken bones to spare?! Heh! You look like shit! You better tend to your mood quickly, because training is about to get rough! Heh! – his tone was naturally irritating, but it would probably be even more annoying to Komatsu considering the outcome of the battle; he had in fact lost and that must have hurt his pride as a saiyan.
He apologized if he was late, but Nasu shook his head. – You are all just in time. – he said. Then, Nasu stared at both the new super saiyans with a rather serious expression on his face. – Congratulations again for becoming super saiyans, both of you. I’m proud. I don’t care who won and who lost, I’ve recognized your efforts with appropriate promotion. But right now I need to push you ever further! – he said, pausing briefly. – Super Saiyan is but the first step. Back at the arena Komatsu managed to take one step further and reach what is called Super Saiyan Second Grade, which greatly increases energy output and strength, but costs a lot of stamina. – he explained. – It’s not a form you should get comfortable with, or it may cost your life in battle, leaving you drained before time. Anyway… There are other two steps you have to take, after second grade. I will be teaching you thought them, and that’s why Miso is here! – and Miso nodded, with a large smirk. – In order for us to start, I need you both to go super saiyan and then reach the second grade state. Komatsu, that should be natural to you now, but for you, Jie Shan, you will need to harvest you maximum energy output! It will be hard and tiring, but you can do it with some effort. – he said. – Now, start! – Nasu ordered the two of them.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Mar 23, 2016 9:42:28 GMT -5
Jie Shan chuckled at Miso. "I look forward too it! Glad I could make your wallet a little bit heavier yesterday." The promise of booze was certainly an enticing one, and Jie Shan felt as if he would need soon enough. Any meeting with his father was the kind of meeting that could drive Jie Shan to drink, whether it be to douse the flames of frustration or blunt the edge of the bad memories trying to cut him up on the inside. Even a Super Saiyan was not completely in control, he reminded himself. Come to think of it, he said to himself, the Super Saiyan state, at least in its most basic form, was all about losing control.
Komatsu arrived soon after. Jie Shan's black eyes lingered on the boy, and he gave the young major a small nod of greeting when he had arrived and grin. At least they were no longer at each other's throats. Good for the both of them, Jie Shan realized, last time they had been, both of them had nearly died. Jie Shan had no hard feelings against the boy, despite the harsh battle the two of them had engaged in. To Jie Shan, it was already ancient history and he was eager to forget the black cloud of death that had lingered above them both. There was no grudge, no vendetta. Jie Shan simply wanted to move forward. And he hoped that the young Major Komatsu was willing to put it behind him too.
Jie Shan turned his gaze on Miso as he spoke to Komatsu. How crude, he thought, but he did not let the thoughts reach his face. It almost seemed as if the older Saiyan was mocking the boy. And that did not sit particularly well with Jie Shan. The boy had tried his hardest and had even more than turned the tables on Jie Shan. Had it not been for Jie Shan's own zenkai and subsequent transformation, the boy likely would be the only one standing here and Miso would be calling Komatsu counselor instead of Jie Shan. But, Jie Shan reminded himself, it was not his place to step in. After all, he was the outsider here. A hybrid and the only one of them who did not spring from the same family tree. For all he knew, this was common for their family. He'd not say anything, but simply turn his gaze back to Nasu.
The Overseer claimed he was proud. Jie Shan grinned, glad to hear it. He was proud of himself. To become a Super Saiyan... It was something many warriors dreamed of, but never came close. And here he was, a halfblood, all golden and powerful. But the man said something even more interesting: Super Saiyan was only the first step. Jie Shan had expected as much. The power that Nasu wielded was quite different from their own, it was more refined. And even Komatsu had seemed to break into some new power. Super Saiyan Second Grade is what they called it, apparently, and Jie Shan was more than surprised to learn it had an actual name. And that Nasu expected him to slip into it.
Well, thought Jie Shan, he'd best not waste any time. Jie Shan spread his legs and lowered himself into a stance meant for charging. He summoned the power of the Super Saiyan. The golden power came quickly and readily, spring up from the pits of his spirit. In a flash, golden light exploded from him and his hair ran from gray to gold, his eyes turning from Saiyan black to Super Saiyan teal. A warmth spread through his body, his muscles enriched with ki. Slowly, he flexed his new found power, sounding it out. This was the first time he'd had chance since the arena match to do so. Jie Shan smirked in satisfaction. It still felt as good as it had yesterday, and maybe even better. After all, this time he wasn't being harassed by a Super Saiyan child.
But Jie Shan was expected to go even further. He nodded to himself. He'd been training to enter the Super Saiyan state with Rudieri, and for weeks. He could do this. All he had to do was remembered what he'd been working towards, that power for which he'd been fighting so hard. Jie Shan reached deep into the pits of his soul, where that power had come from. He searched for something as the power began to course through and around him. He remembered. The anger, the desperation, what it was like to nearly cross to the other side of the veil. He had not wanted to die! And he hadn't. He was living again, but he wanted that power back. He wanted more of it. Slowly, he let the old feeling of rage and desperation seep up again. But he was trying to control it. It was almost like the time he'd learned to control his great ape form. That blinding rage... He needed to be in control. Control was everything, he realized now. There was a sheer, white wall of rage in his mind. Sparks fell from his body. But he was controlling it. Holding it back.
In the pit of his soul, Jie Shan found more power. He gripped tight around it and began to pull, trying to bring it back with him. And even if it did not come peacefully, he would bring it by force! The power coursed all around him, going even further. He could feel his energy rising. With one final push, Jie Shan ripped the power from his heart.
"Rah!" He screamed as another wave of golden light shot from his body. He panted, his chest heaving up and down. He certainly felt stronger. Satisfied, his smirk returned to his face and he looked back up at the group around him, looking at each in turn before his gaze fell back on the Overseer. "Well," said Jie Shan, "That's that. What do you have in mind next?"
Unlocking Super Saiyan Second Grade! It's a x14/x13 for Jie Shan, due to being Half-Elemi!
New PL: 2,179,744/2,024,048
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Post by King of All on Mar 23, 2016 10:36:26 GMT -5
Komatsu's brow's instantly furrowed as Miso spoke to him, immediately taunting him in a way that felt like he had driven a blade into what pride he had managed to hold onto. He grit his teeth, trying to keep his anger in check before he would speak.
"Nah, I'm all healed up. Although if you want some broken bones, I'll be more than happy to break your's for you." His words were laced with the anger he felt, even though he attempted to make his words sound light hearted. He'd have no problem fighting Miso if he taunted him further. Hell why not just throw the rest of him through the mud? Who cared if he won or lost... he'd be sure to make him hurt if he tried. Komatsu's power would spike, and then fall back to normal as he tried to keep his own power in check.
He would then look back towards Nasu when he spoke, making sure to keep Miso in his peripheral vision as he listened to his brother's words. He claimed to not truly care who won, that he was proud of both of them for their achievements yesterday, but he still needed them to push further. Komatsu wanted to groan at that statement, but stayed silent, his serious expression unchanging as he continued to listen.
He continued on to explain the step beyind Super Saiyan that Komatsu had achieved, and how it drained Stamina like crazy. He nodded at that, as he felt like he was still feeling drained from having called on so much power at once. In fact as he had summoned the strength to ascend a step further, he had felt quite sick to his stomach, much like the first time he had called on his super saiyan transformation. Was this something that was going to regularly happen?
He was definitely going to find out, as Nasu wanted them to immediately step into the highest state of Super saiyan that the two boys could achieve. Well, it would be a good test of his theory at least. With a deep breath, Komatsu called upon the power he now commanded. His energy spiked as it started to rise, doubling, tripling and going even farther. His golden aura seemed to explode around him as it pushed his hair up slightly, forcing it into a golden state just like his ki. His eyes went from black to teal, looking even more fierce as he kept up his serious expression. He pushed his power beyond the state of Super Saiyan, summoning up the strength needed to go into his Super Saiyan Second Grade with ease.
With another light exhale, he looked over as Jie braced himself to transform into the Super Saiyan state. Well, he had lost that match, but at least he had accomplished one goal he had set out for... pushing Jie into this state. His serious expression broke for a moment, slipping into a light smile with the corner of his lip as he watched the hybrid. His power was resting a decent amount lower than his own, until he pushed himself into the same state as Komatsu, bringing his power to near par with his.
"And I didn't even have to slap you around that time." Komatsu said in a light attempt to raise his own mood as he looked back to his brother, waiting for further instructions on how to ascend even further.
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
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Miso laughed when Komatsu responded to his teasing and smirk in a mischievous, almost evil manner. – It would amuse me greatly to see you try, little maggot! Heh! But I didn’t come here for that, today! Heh. – he said with his cocky tone, showing he had no fear of his nephew, even though right now Komatsu’s power level was above Miso’s. Nasu just rolled his eyes in annoyance with the two teasing each other. ”Goddammit… Will they ever stop with this bullshit?!” he asked himself, but decided to pay no mind for that. There were two important reasons Miso was there and he needed him there, so best not to focus on the downside. Then, Miso chuckled a bit more with Jie Shan’s response to his initial comment and he nodded to the hybrid. – Then it’s settled! After this training, if you are still in one piece! – the saiyan General said.
Back to the training, Jie shan was the first to try. With some focus, he managed to turn himself into a super saiyan. It still took him quite some effort, but he was actually pretty good at it now, and it was really impressive. Then, with some extra focus and effort, he tapped into the power deep in his core and managed to bring it out. His muscle mass increased a bit, his hair became slightly more golden and his aura expanded greatly. This was the maximum forced energy output the Super Saiyan form could generate without fully mastering other aspects of ki control.
Komatsu was second, but he achieved it with much more ease, since he was already familiar with the said form. ”He is already getting used to that. Good.” Nasu thought to himself, making a brief nod as he evaluated his two students. Komatsu teased Jie Shan after the hybrid managed to transform and Nasu nodded again, irritated with the fact that his little brother was beginning to act like Miso from time to time, and he wasn’t sure he could handle two Misos in his life. Actually, he was pretty sure he couldn’t!
– Okay then. You are both Super Saiyans Second Grade. That’s good, but, as must be probably already noticing, to stay on this form alone is tiring. Of course the boost in power helps a little bit in a fight, after a few minutes you will start growing tired and this will cost you dearly. – he stated. – This was the form I’ve used to defeat Etorin back then, you must remember it, Jie Shan. After blasting the bastard I was completely drained, especially because of this form. – he admitted, exhaling deeply as he remembered how troublesome it was to dispatch of the old bastard. – Then, you must ascend even further, beyond this form! There still two forms of the super saiyan state that can be reached through severe training. The first one is a state known as Super Saiyan Third Grade. – he paused briefly, to allow them to swallow all that information. – While I myself have never reached this state because of a personal choice, I feel it’s important to explain about it to the both of you. Third Grade is a state where the super saiyan must be able to bulk up. It’s a powering up skill that some develop. I’m not one of those, because I’ve never saw any advantage in sacrificing my speed for power. – he explained and then he pointed at Miso with his hand. – General Miso, on the other hand, is quite fond of that form. The power output is far superior anything a super saiyan can dream to reach, but it takes its tools on the body and your speed will be lower than even the average super saiyan form. – Nasu said. – Anyway, I will let Miso show you the form. General, if you would. – Miso nodded and jumped onto the titled floor, approaching the trio.
– Get ready to get wet, ladies! Heh! – he said in a cheeky tone. Then, he clenched both his fists and spread up his legs, charging an absurdly powerful golden aura. The whole place began to shake violently and probably the whole Soy Capital was shaking with his incredible and absurd power surge. His body began to grow bulkier and bulkier until he was almost two and half times more muscular than he was, which was quite a fearsome sight, considering Miso was naturally seven foot tall, and now was over eight foot tall. His hair became gold and spiked up a bit, and his aura seemed like a real, living, golden flame.
[Miso’s Base Power Level: 149,400] [Super Saiyan Third Grade. Current PL: 2,838,600/1,643,400] (Flavoring the full multiplier since no one is fighting him xD)
His offensive power level greatly surpassed even Komatsu’s own as it reached nearly three million. Nasu, however, seemed unimpressed. – As you can see, he is absolutely strong, but his speed doesn’t even compare to his offensive power. The body becomes far too heavy in this form, and on top of that, the energy is wasted at an even faster pace than the Super Saiyan Second Grade. In short, this form can be considered a glass cannon. – Nasu said. Miso, on the other hand, hmphed and then chuckled. – It’s not a problem if you kill your foes quickly, you little bugs! Hehehe! – he said, laughing in the end. – Quite a risky bet in my opinion. Anyway… Any of you two know how to bulk up and is willing to try reaching this form? – Nasu asked of his students, staring at both new super saiyans in front of him.
Post by King of All on Mar 30, 2016 21:22:48 GMT -5
Komatsu didn't say a word as he listened to his brother explain the transformation that they were currently in, and then move on to the next stages of power both he and Jie should be able to obtain. Super Saiyan Third Grade and Full Power. It looked like they would need to learn a bulking skill to master the Super Saiyan Third Grade, but already it was sounding way too un appealing to him. Komatsu would always favor speed over brute force, therefore that transformation would do him more harm that good. Still though ,as his uncle stepped up to show them the transformation, Koma would just roll his eyes as his uncle gloated.
Miso would grow at an alarming rate, becoming so massive Komatsu couldn't even imagine how he moved at all! he might as well be a stationary tank firing off ki blasts in hopes of hitting a much faster target. Miso still seemed to be quite proud of his transformation and Komatsu had to resist what his sour mood wanted him to say. He would simply look away from Miso, and focus on Nasu instead.
"I favor my speed over... that. I can't bulk up nor do I want to learn how to. I agree that it's too risky and makes you far too large of a target." Komatsu would reason with his brother, seemingly patiently. Komatsu was trying excessively hard to keep up his poker face, as his body began to tingle like a fire was being ignited within him.. and not in a good way. Koma's energy was very slowly slipping, though at a faster rate than Jie's would with the natural progression of this transformation.
"The form after Third Grade... that's Super Saiyan Full Power right..? Does that need a trigger as well? Or a special skill like Bulking does?" He would ask, skipping right ahead to the answers he wanted. It could be seen as rude towards Jie Shan if the boy had wanted to learn bulking however.
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
Jie Shan remained silent watching Miso’s transformation while Komatsu, just after his uncle finishing ascending to that monstrous form said he favored his speed, just like Nasu did, and didn’t know how to bulk up to a power weighted form, saying it was way too risk. Nasu made a brief nod, but Miso chuckled and widened his already large and annoying conceited smirk. – Pussy! Prefers to run away than to fight! – but he stopped at that and then Komatsu asked about the second form, asking if it was the full powered state and Nasu nodded, staring at him with a quite serious expression on his face.
– Indeed. The Super Saiyan Full Power is the pinnacle of the Super Saiyan transformation tree. Although not nearly as strong in pure offensive output as the Third Grade, it balances everything, making the best of both physical potential and ki use. – he began to explain. – In fact, it is a state where the mastery of ki is so great, that the Super Saiyan form becomes natural. You can sustain it almost indefinitely without any decrease in your stamina. You can even sleep while transformed and live your life naturally. It’s the only form where you don’t even have an aura around your body the whole time and, even when you do flare your ki aura, it’s much less fiery-like than the other stages. – Nasu continued. – In short, the Super Saiyan Full Power is what a mature saiyan should be using while transforming. It’s a form that has only advantages over the others. – he finished, glaring at Miso, who just hmphed and gazed away from Nasu, annoyed by his statement; deep inside the older saiyan General knew the flaws about his favored Third Grade state, but didn’t like to admit it.
– Allow me to show you two the Super Saiyan Full Powe. – As he finished saying that, without even flaring a ki aura or anything, Nasu’s hair became spiked and light gold in color, without that incredible glow it had when they flared an aura. His eyes became teal in color and his body muscle mass increased just slightly, still noticeable, but nearly as much as in the base super saiyan form or the second grade. Nasu’s power also skyrocketed absurdly.
[Super Saiyan Full Power. Current Power Level: 3,414,848]
Even at his third grade form, Miso’s offensive power was still lower than Nasu’s full powered power level, showing just how much stronger the saiyan Overseer actually was. Upon finishing transforming, he stared from Komatsu to Jie Shan and began to speak again. – This state isn’t one of rage. In fact, you won’t feel any rage related to the transformation once you evolve this much. It’s a stage of mastery of ki. If you can sense ki and suppress your own ki, then you can definitely achieve this state. There’s no other way than to train those ki control skills. Are you two capable of doing that? If you are, I can help you reach this form right now. – Nasu said, waiting for their answer.
Post by King of All on Mar 31, 2016 13:40:28 GMT -5
"Shut the hell up! I've never run away from a fight nor will I ever!" Komatsu couldn't even catch his own words before they sprang from his mouth. He was glaring at Miso so intensely at this point, if he could fire lasers from his eyes Miso would have been killed! How DARE he accuse HIM of being a coward!? He would never turn tail like that bastard Jarvis had! Komatsu's aura flared outwards around himself during his little outburst, but as a fresh wave of pain coursed through his body, Komatsu would draw himself back in.
"Tch" He would say to put an end to his own thoughts on the matter as he tried to focus on his brother, but this creeping pain inside of him was making him quite edgy. Every now and then, his hand would twitch as it would slowly start to become over-whelming.
Nasu explained how the Full Power transformation had it's own requirements, that a saiyan must be in full control of his ki to even be able to reach it. He could sense ki, but he had never learned to suppress it. It wasn't a skill he had ever deemed necessary before. He had always wanted his power to be known, for everyone to be able to see it and fear it.
"I can sense ki in my immediate area, but I can't suppress it, I haven't tried or ever felt like I needed to." Komatsu would admit as he watched his brother transform with such ease. His power level was absurd and easily overshadowed his uncle's own. this made the first small smirk of the day appear on the boy's face.
'He's really starting to look more like dad... and feels like it too... He's not the same Nasu I grew up with at all' Hw would think to himself in silent awe. He wished he could be on the same level as his brother was now.... if his parents were watching, no doubt they were proud of him...
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
– Hehehehe! Looks like the little lap dog is barking! But, you know what, maggot?! Barking dogs don’t bite! Heh! – Miso continued to tease Komatsu, but Nasu glared at him, like if he was telling him to shut the fuck up, and the monstrously bulked up saiyan just laughed in response, but at least he shut his mouth, which was a relief. Then, Nasu stared back at Komatsu as the kid explained that he could sense ki in the same region, the same degree of proficiency both Nasu and Miso had, which was more than enough, but he revealed he didn’t know how to suppress his energy yet, making Nasu sigh in disappointment. ”Okay, this just scratches the Full Power training off the schedule… But that’s alright! At least they will graduate in the Soy School today!” Nasu thought to himself, making a brief nod.
– Alright then. For this final part of our training, I will be teaching you two the final technique of the Soy School, called Final Revenger. In order to teach you all that, I want you two to fight against me, all out, and at the same time. How does that sound? Miso will be there just watching. His usefulness will be explained later! – Nasu said with a serious tone, with his teal-colored eyes going from Jie Shan to Komatsu, as he waited for an answer from the duo of super saiyans. It would be a tough fight for Nasu, even though he was far stronger than any of them alone. Tag teaming on Nasu even gave them a chance of winning against him, and that was a dish no saiyan would refuse, although many disliked fighting alongside allies.
At least this individuality trait was far more common in the Empire than in the Alliance, where the bonds between friends and comrades could be turned into real raw power, and the two students of the Soy School of Martial Arts would soon learn that.
Post by King of All on Apr 2, 2016 21:07:18 GMT -5
"You really piss me off you know that!?" Komatsu would growl at his uncle, his eyes narrowing on him as Nasu spoke. He was barely aware of what was going on with their training at this point. All he knew was that his body ached like hell, and he had a sudden, strong desire to punch in his uncles face. The shitty bastard would deserve all of it!
When Nasu's words finally registered, that he was going to teach them the final revenger by fighting both himself and Jie, Komatsu's focus remained on Miso instead. He didn't want to insult Nasu with his next words... He knew Nasu was going to be the greatest challenge Koma ever had, even with Jie Shan fighting at his side... but right now Nasu wasn't the one his blood boiled to hurt.
"While working with him is less than ideal, I want another crack at beating this jerk's face in! General or not, I'll have you licking my boots when I'm done with you!" Komatsu would snarl, his aura flaring up with every word. Every time it did, he could feel pain firing through his body like a bolt of lightning, but he was slowly starting to ignore it, as he was much too focused on beating Miso.
------- WC: 214 TWC: 1,945
Last Edit: Apr 3, 2016 12:22:52 GMT -5 by King of All
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
Nasu took a deep breath and Miso continued to laugh in a rather arrogant tone. The tension was building up quite a lot between Komatsu and Miso and that would screw up his tag team sort of spar he was having in mind. Komatsu and Jie Shan wouldn’t be able to work together in an appropriate manner with Miso getting Komatsu out of his mind and, therefore, Nasu changed his mind. He stared at Jie Shan and sighed. – Lieutenant Colonel, it will be best if we both step out of the ring for a while and allow them to settle this. Then we can train the two of us, or Komatsu can join us again if he is still in fighting shape. – he said to Jie Shan, before staring back at Komatsu and Miso. – Alright, you want to settle this, go ahead! Just remember this is a training to get you to the peak of the Soy School! I want this to be an actual lesson, you hear me, General?! – Nasu said to his uncle, who nodded, chuckling in excitement as his blood began to boil.
– Oh yeah! It will be a lesson, don’t worry about that, Overseer! Heh! But it doesn’t mean I can’t have fun beating this little shitty cockroach here! Hehehehe! – he said, teasing Komatsu even more. Nasu, on the other hand, just shrugged. – I don’t care. That’s a problem for the two of you to figure out. I will be just here watching in silence. Just teach him the techniques. – and with that final instruction, Nasu leaped away from the titled floor and stayed outside with his arms folded, staring at the ring, where Komatsu and Miso were about to clash.
Miso stared at his younger nephew with his sly expression. – And it goes like this! – he exclaimed as he flared his extremely powerful golden aura of the Super Saiyan Third Grade. Then, the monstrous saiyan General dashed forward, grabbing his clenched right fist as he approached Komatsu. Once he got into his absurdly big melee range, he would try to punch Komatsu right into his face. Although Miso’s body movements were slowed down, his attacks were absurdly fast! – Taste the Final Revenger!! – he roared in excitement as he had just started the technique with the punch. Then, should it hit or not, he would follow with a reverse side kick, aiming to send Komatsu flying into the air.
Should that attack hit, the rush technique would continue with yet another punch, this time to Komatsu’s back, aiming to throw him even higher into the air. The brutality of this attack made justice to its name as, the next move of the rush attack would be with the monstrous saiyan General trying to grab Komatsu’s head with his absurd large hands and pull his body towards him as he threw a powerful knee strike to his kidneys with the goal of sending him even further into the air and, finally, to end the absurd combo, Miso would fly up above Komatsu and double axe handle punch him down to the ground, with the goal of inflicting a heavy load of damage to the super saiyan boy. It was lengthy attack, but so perfectly connected that avoiding it was almost impossible considering the sheer power of the technique, that harvested the fullest potential of the offensive output of the body.
Miso’s Stamina 3/3 > 0/3
Tech used: [AD][OT-3] Final Revenger: First, the urser grabs his clenched fist as he charges at the opponent and punches them in their face before reverse side kicking them up into the air. Then, he flies after the opponent and punches them up into the air again. Next, he grabs the opponent by their head and leaps over behind to knee them up further into the air. Finally, the user flies up above the opponent and Double Axe Handle punches them down to the ground, inflicting a high amount of damage. [100% Damage] PL 2,838,600!!!!
Post by King of All on Apr 4, 2016 16:01:24 GMT -5
This was going to suck, and it was going to suck a lot. For Komatsu to see the full extent of the Final Revenger, he needed to see it in it's entirety. If it was an energy based skill, then Komatsu would still be able to learn it even if he got out of the way... however as his uncle rushed him, he realized that this was yet another physical assault. This was playing right into his uncle's strength, regardless of how slow he was in his new bulked out form.
'Fine, then bring it on... get over confident you old washed up jack ass.' Komatsu would think as his serious expression remained. It seemed at first like the young saiyan wouldn't move out of the way instead just taking the hit like he was completely not expecting it. However, as Miso grew closer, his hands flew up towards his own face in a block. *CRUNCH* Miso's fist connected with the block, a sickening crunch could be heard as Komatsu's left arm fractured. *CRACK* Miso's kick then collided with Komatsu's side, re-breaking a few of the same ribs his uncle had broken in their last training session. Komatsu was sent flying up into the air, but his expression never changed, even as pain flooded all of his senses in that moment.
'Straight punch, reverse side kick into the air...' Komatsu would silently repeat to himself as he would watch every step in the sequence. All he had to do, was recover before he was knocked back down, as he assumed what was going to come next... As if on cue, his uncle threw yet another punch at him, this time the younger saiyan would use his already fractured arm, reinforced by his right to deflect the blow from causing anymore serious injury. However, instead of another kick as he predicted, Miso managed to grab him, drawing him in close and bringing his knee up into his gut. This caused Koma to choke and have to gasp for breath. 'Straight punch, reverse kick into the air, punch again for more altitude, grapple and knee to the gut for initial damage... and then' And then, he knew what was coming. This was what he would need to recover from the most, the blow that would knock the young Super Saiyan back down towards the ground with deadly force, thanks to both the momentum, and the sheer power placed behind this attack. *WHAM*
And there it was, a final strike behind Komatsu's neck that made him seriously see stars. His head was spinning after the strike, the amount of pain he felt made him feel sick, and he was worried he might actually throw up when *BOOM* Komatsu hit the ground hard in much the same fashion he had in the area just the day before. Komatsu didn't move for a moment, as his body needed to register that it was no longer being attacked, but was now in some very serious pain.
Slowly but surely, Komatsu would use his right hand to push himself back up onto his hands and knee's, coughing up blood as oxygen began to refill his lungs. He would pant heavily but then push himself back up to his feet. His left arm had already turned shades of black and blue, as did the back of his neck. No doubt his ribs looked worse underneath his shirt as you could see his blood staining through the clothes. However, even through all of this intense damage, Komatsu was determined to stand. Even against such an absurdly powerful attack, Komatsu had been able to some degree, control the amount of damage he had taken, moving his body in ways that would lessen the severity of the blows.
Koma would wait for his uncle to land, no doubt having some cocky remark to accompany that shit eating grin of his. Koma's expression however, was just as serious and pissed off as it had been before the attack.
"That was sloppy old man. Is your old age finally catching up to you?" Komatsu would ask, even as blood stained his lips. He would suddenly act insanely fast, bracing himself into the Soy School stance only long enough to push himself off of the ground and charge his uncle with all of the speed he could muster.
"Let me show you how it's done" He would cry out as he threw his right fist at his uncle's face, having made sure that his dominant arm hadn't been damaged so that he could hit his uncle with everything he had. Whether that hit or miss, Komatsu would swing his body around into a reverse side kick. Seeing how massive his uncle was to send flying, he had to fuel extra ki into his kick as he hit him, his body exploding with golden energy as he would try to hit him.
If he was successful and actually managed to knock his uncle into the air, he would follow through with the rest of the Final Revenger, striking him with another punch, aiming his knee to hit him in the kidneys (at least if he could get passed all of that muscle) and then speeding up above him and putting as much strength as possible to knock him back down. However, seeing as one of his arms was broken, he knew it wouldn't do as much damage, and so he put his own spin on the technique for the time being, spinning himself so that he could use his legs in a powerful kick back down to Earth.
If his initial attack missed, then Komatsu would just rally himself by using his speed to out manoever Miso, and try again until he was successful. --------------- Learned [OT-3] Final Revenger Stamina: 0/3 WC: 963 TWC: 2,908
Last Edit: Apr 5, 2016 9:15:38 GMT -5 by King of All
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
Komatsu had been hit straight by Miso’s charge and flurry of attacks without any reaction other than trying to block a few of the punches he threw. Nasu narrowed his eyes as he watched the scene. ”He is letting himself being hit on purpose! But will he resist all of the power of the Final Revenger?” Nasu wondered as he watched his younger brother get really wrecked by the constant and furious attacks, until he was send flying towards the floor, creating a small crater on it upon hitting. Impressive enough, Komatsu got up rather quickly; he was damaged, but not enough so that he couldn’t fight again and that was really outstanding and beyond any expectations. ”He is truly growing…” Nasu mused for a second.
Miso, on the other hand, laughed a bit, staring at Komatsu’s sorry state. – Should’ve stayed down, maggot! That way I would only have to stomp you to end this! Like the bug you are! Hehehe! – he said in his cheeky tone with that annoying smirk of his. But when Komatsu answered, trying to tease him, Miso’s expression became slightly darker. – You must love feeling pain, because I’m about to give you plenty of it! Hehehe! – he answered. But Miso was drained for the moment; the Final Revenger was an amazing technique, but it required impressive speed and power all at once so that the target wouldn’t escape in the middle of it, and, because of that, it took serious tools on someone’s stamina, and that was the opportunity Komatsu seized.
The young super saiyan dashed towards Miso and immediately began to copy his attack. At first Miso thought that he could block it, but he was way too tired and Komatsu was much faster than him. The beating started and Komatsu got it all right, punishing Miso severely for what he had done, throwing him high into the air, almost reaching the ceiling, until he double axed handled him back down with tremendous violence, making another crater on the titled floor, only much bigger due to his weight and size. The damage was enormous, but Miso managed to get back on his feet while still sporting that smirk of his.
His body was wrecked, his battle suit had cracked and lost both shoulder guards, he had probably broken a couple ribs and some other injuries, but he seemed to still be able to fight for a bit, but certainly not for long. But he was a true warrior and he wouldn’t let this hurt his pride nor his will to fight. – Good shot, brat! I guess you finally understood just how violent your daddy was on fighting! Hehehe! Your mom was a monster of cruelty and bloodthirsty in battle… Waaay scarier than Natto, but damn, that bastard knew how to hurt people! Hehehe! – he started explaining, laughing a bit. – But you are about to now the ultimate power of the Soy School! Hehehe! And that will be way beyond your expectations! Heh! – he announced.
Both fighters were drained and Miso wouldn’t charge to attack him. No, he would focus on recovering his stamina so that he could use the final attack.
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