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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 7, 2016 21:28:36 GMT -5
(Thread PL: 327,648/163,824)
(This takes place some time ago)
Jie Shan made for the Soy School Training Hall. He'd been slacking. He knew he had been. And he felt guilty for it, but what else could he do? He had work to do. As much as he would like to train and fight full time, he had to deal with the administration side of things as well. Jie Shan did not like to think of himself as a desk jockey, but these days he shredded more papers than he did foes. But that would change with today. The blade rattled in its sheath against his back. It would be good to free the blade again.
Jie Shan finally landed at the training hall. He wasted no time in making for the entrance of the hall and letting himself inside the building. It seemed he was here first. Good, he thought, he liked to be early. The early bird catches the worm. Jie Shan crossed to the center of the room and drew his blade. There he stood, slowing dropping down into a sitting position as he began to treat his blade. The material was resilient and strong, but he still needed to care for it. It was a gift from his mother, after all. And besides, it gave him something to do before the Overseer showed up.
He ran his hand up and down the blade, polishing it with the cloth of his shirt. How strange, he thought, he'd never learned what material the blade was made of. He assumed it was Elemi make, but he did not know for sure. Whatever it was, it held strong against everything he'd tested it against so far. Even in his arena battle against Komatsu it held up. In fact, he reminded himself, it had been essential to his victory. With a sigh, Jie Shan sat the blade in his lap and looked up, waiting for the Overseer.
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[Thread Power Level: 453,162] [Flavored as 250,000] [Timeline wise, placed before leaving for the meeting with the Cerulean Empire]
Nasu had a very important meeting to attend, a meeting that could seal the fate in between two factions that had been in war against each other since the Alliance was created; the old Saiyan Empire, now named Cerulean Empire, and the Saiyan Alliance. Karota had settled this meeting and the ones chosen to go there were obviously Nasu, as the ultimate representative of the Alliance, General Miso, Colonel Karota and the new asset of the Alliance, Sergeant Leena. Nasu wished he could take others, such as Komatsu and Jie Shan, but Karota and Miso advised him otherwise; it was important to have strong people capable of defending the Saiyan Alliance and the Planet while the strongest were away, and Jie Shan, together with Komatsu, were the best the Alliance had, after the triumvirate composed by Nasu, Miso and Karota. But, to make sure things would be absolutely safe, Jie Shan needed to finish his training; due to a little misunderstanding in between Komatsu and Miso, his training was stopped and only Komatsu managed to finish the training under the Soy School.
When Nasu arrived at the Soy Training Hall, Jie Shan was already there, diligent as ever, and that made the Overseer crack a subtle grin; Nasu was sporting a new outfit, letting go of his traditional battle suit with shoulder and tight guards to a more basic set. One thing, however, could be noticed: Nasu had one of saiyan’s characteristic growth spur after his 21 years old birthday, that wasn’t even celebrated due to the tension they were in, with this possible meeting. He seemed much bulkier than before, and his power was ever rising; there was really no telling just how strong Nasu would become in the future, but he would definitely be among the strongest in the universe.
– You are already here. That’s good. I want to finish you training today. – he said, pausing briefly. – You will be in charge of the Alliance with Counselor Kyuri for a couple days while we go on a peace mission with… Guess what! – he paused again briefly, to let him wonder for a while before ending the mystery. – With the Saiyan Empire!... Or what it used to be… It’s now called Cerulean Empire or whatever. – he said, shrugging a bit.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 8, 2016 10:19:47 GMT -5
The Overseer arrived. Jie Shan felt him first. He always did. The Overseer had a distinct energy, and a large one. Certainly the largest one that Jie Shan had ever felt. It was insane how strong this man was. And he was barely older than Jie Shan himself. It seemed that the young halfblood had his work cut out for him.
It was not long before he finally saw the Overseer. He’d grown, in both height and mads. He had been taller than Jie Shan before, but now the difference was even greater. Interesting, he thought, that would change how Jie Shan fought the Overseer. With his new reach, the Overseer had a new advantage over the hybrid.
Soon enough, the Overseer revealed that he would be placed in charge of the planet, alongside his fellow Counselor, while the Overseer attended a kind of peace meeting with the leader of the Saiyan Empire. Or the Cerulean, he corrected himself. Not that it mattered to him. The name might change, but it was still the same at its core.
"Noted, Overseer," said Jie Shan, rising from the ground using his blade to push himself up. "I won't let you down. I promise you that," continued the hybrid. And he meant it. The young Counselor took his duties seriously. Though it did sting to hear he would be stuck on Natto once again. He could stand to be assigned offworld, get a diplomacy mission of his own. But he said nothing, instead allowing the idea to pass without protest.
He cleared his throat and looked at the Overseer. "So, I suppose it's time to finish the Soy School training, eh?" Asked Jie Shan. "Good, I say. I'm eager to finish and prove my mastery of it. Though I suppose it's been a long time coming."
Truly, it felt like it had. Since he had begun it, so much had changed. He was a Super Saiyan and a Counselor. He scarcely felt like the same person. He’d always been more powerful than most. But now? Now he was on an entirely different echelon. And yet he still had so much further to go. And finishing this training would just be one small step on the further road to glory.
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– I know you won’t let me down, Counselor. – Nasu immediately replied to him, chuckling lightly. Then, when he spoke about mastering the Soy School, Nasu nodded. – Indeed. I need you to be on top form for the brief period when most of us are going to be absent. But, before mastering the Soy School with the two final techniques I will be teaching you, I want to help you master the super saiyan form. - and he paused for a second. – I recall you mastered the Second Grade. Well… Like I’ve said before, there’s the Third Grade stage that Miso showed you last time, but I don’t think it’s useful in the end. You become way too vulnerable in a fight and it really doesn’t compensate with the increase in power. In the end, the best option, in my opinion, is balance. And, therefore, the Super Saiyan Full Power, while not as strong as the Third Grade in raw power, it’s effective both as an enhancement of the normal Super Saiyan form, while also granting a major bonus. – and he paused once again. – The stamina isn’t drained at all while using that form, to the point that, considering you can master it, you will even be able to sleep using the form. – Nasu explained.
Then, he turned his back to Jie Shan and slowly walked towards the middle of the arena of the Soy Training Hall before turning back to him. – For that you need a perfect control of your ki energy. Being able to sense and suppress are basics to attain this form. With that in mind, tap into your core and reach the point of equilibrium before forcing your body to increase your power and, as consequence, transform. – and, after saying that, Nasu folded his arms and went silent, waiting for the hybrid to try ascending to the fully powered super saiyan form.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 9, 2016 16:23:30 GMT -5
Jie Shan nodded. He was now familiar with the various forms of the Super Saiyan form. He let a little smirk crack on his face. Forms upon forms. It sounded like his counselour job. Forms and forms, paper ones of course, but still they came to him. If only the power of the legendary Super Saiyan came as readily forth as they did. If they did, Jie Shan would be among the most powerful being in the universe. Sadly, paper did not equate to physical power.
Overseer Nasu explained the basics of the form. Control of one's energy, the ability to sense and suppress? Jie Shan had both of those in spades. He knew how to control his energy, suppress it so that it seemed lower than what it actually was. And Jie Shan could of course feel the latent life energy of others. It was how he sensed the Overseer so easily. The Overseer was like a bright, burning beacon for someone like Jie Shan, so long as they were in the same general area as one another.
"So," began Jie Shan, "It's about control. I think I get it. And I think I can do it. But, you know, it's kind of funny. Ironic, even." Jie Shan laughed and shook his head, the grin on his face growing even wider than before. "It's like, we become Super Saiyans by losing control, by letting our emotions rule us. And the way that we're supposed to maximize its potential? By taking control of ourselves. Funny stuff."
Jie Shan shook his head and chuckled once again. "Sorry, I should stop wasting both my time and yours. I'll give it a go!" Jie Shan exclaimed, finally ready to try and transform into the fully powered Super Saiyan state. The young halfblood cracked his knuckles and crouched low, like he was ready to fight.
Slowly, he began to gather the energy about him. In a flash, he transcended to the state of Super Saiyan. The aura around him burst into a brilliant gold that now matched his hair. It seemed to him as if the entire world was shaking. His power was growing, changing rapidly with the Super Saiyan transformation. Control, he told himself, he needed to remember to control himself. He could feel his own power rising, like a rocket shooting off into space. But now came the control part. Jie Shan grunted.
It was as if he were forcing the power down, condensing it, making it something sharper and more deadly. It tried to bite back, tried to get away. Such power could run wild if he let it, and maybe a lesser man would. But Jie Shan knew he had it in him to control the power of the Super Saiyan. With a final roar, Jie Shan squished the power of the Super Saiyan into its most refined form: Super Saiyan Full Power, as the Overseer had called it.
And it felt good. Natural even. It felt as if Jie Shan could maintain the form indefinitely, like he was meant to be in it. He flexed his muscles, testing them. He felt strong. Stronger than he had before. And so, he finally reached the plateu of the Super Saiyan form. He looked up at Nasu, his teals eye staring at his commander, a smirk on his face. "Like this, huh?" Asked Jie Shan. He cracked his neck, the muscles in it taut with power. "You know," continued the Super Saiyan hybrid, "I could get used to this. Makes me wonder why I didn't try it sooner, you know?" Jie Shan felt as if he could take on the whole world. He certainly thought he could take on what was left of the Soy School training. He balled up his fists and planted them at his waists, striking a confident pose. "So, Overseer, what's next on the agenda for today? I imagine at this point the answer 'fight me' or 'I'm going to beat you up', but I want to hear it from you."
Jie Shan laughed at his own statement, still in good spirits. Damn, he thought, he might as well just stay in this form all the time if it felt this good.
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Nasu chuckled a bit when he spoke about how odd it was that, in order to become a super saiyan they needed an absurd amount of rage, and, in an opposite spectrum, to attain control over it, they needed control and peace. Then, once he said it was a waste of time to talk about those things, Nasu just shook his head. – It’s not a waste of time. It’s actually quite important in order to understand how this world works. You see… I was but an angry fool all the time before I took the burden of the Alliance onto my shoulders. To lose some of my rage made my mind clearer and now I’m far more cunning than I used to be. – he admitted and, once he had finished saying that, he watched as the hybrid tried to reach that power. Jie Shan’s potential was remarkable and, with little difficulty he managed to ascend past his Second Grade form, reaching the mastered power of the legendary golden transformation of the saiyan race. Nasu chuckled lightly and nodded when he asked if it was like this; it was definitely a rhetorical question that needed no answer.
– Because super saiyan form, while uncontrolled takes away most of our intelligence due to the emotions. We can’t really think completely clear, other than about combat tactics and techniques. – and that was at least his own experience with it. After that, he asked what they would be doing now and even jokes, showing just how confident he was with this new form. Nasu chuckled lightly again and, effortlessly, he made his hair spiked and light gold in color and his eyes teal as he ascended to the very same form the hybrid was using.
[Super Saiyan Full Power. Current Power Level: 4,000,000]
Once he transformed, Nasu chuckled again. – You are indeed growing stronger. It’s a shame. I hoped I would still be twice more powerful than you when I transformed, but I guess a little over a fourth will have to be enough, hahaha! – Nasu laughed in the end, as he slid to his Soy School stance. – Now… Let’s see test your power a little bit! – he exclaimed and, without wasting any more time, Nasu flared his bright golden aura around his body and charged forwards, aiming to throw a knee strike to Jie Shan’s guts.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 9, 2016 17:08:37 GMT -5
Jie Shan nodded. The Overseer was certainly right. Jie Shan remembered when he slipped into the Super Saiyan state for the first time. He'd been shaking with anger, desperation, all of those dark emotions that brough the gold power of Super Saiyan bubbling to the surface. But now, he was totally in control. And it felt good. Even better than the first time he had ascended into the Super Saiyan state, strangely. It was as if this were meant to be, like this was how he was supposed to live. And supposedly there was power even beyond this if the tales about Overseer Natto were true. So much power, simply laying in wait inside of them. It was an exciting prospect to say the least, and one that Jie Shan was eager to uncover. But he still had a long ways to go.
The Overseer slipped into his own Super Saiyan state. Jie Shan felt Nasu's power spike and he immediately grit his teeth and slid into his own combat stance. Reflexively, he reached for the blade on his back, but he stopped himself. No, he reminded himself, now was not the time to use his blade. Now was time for him to use the Soy Arts, just as he had been taught. Instead, he corrected himself and slid into the Soy School. He smirked. The Overseer wanted to test him? He'd certainly give him him an answer.
"Alright," shouted Jie Shan as the Overseer dashed at him, "Give me all you got, because I'm certainly not holding back on this one!" And he'd need to be quick, or else the Overseer would thrash him like a rug. Luckily for Jie Shan, he was completely rested for once. Desk work had its benefits, in that he didn't have to exert himself like mad everyday. Almost reflexively, Jie Shan flooded his muscles of ki and burst up and around the Overseer, making use of rapid movement. He appeared behind the Overseer, a little more tired for his attack, but definitely better off than taking a knee to the gut. He hummed to himself, and gave the Overseer a whistle, as if to say 'over here'. "Well, Overseer," said Jie Shan, "I have to commend you for not wasting any time. So quick and so strong, too. I don't think I'd have been able to dodge or block that if I hadn't enhanced my movement with ki."
Jie Shan shook his head and sighed. He was in for a rough fight in the Overseer kept up the offensive like this. He could not dodge forever. Stamina: 2/3
Jie Shan used (ST-1) Rapid Movement and dodged for 2,457,360 PL!
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Jie Shan said that he wasn’t holding back this time and that was good. In fact, it was pretty much the first real opportunity for Nasu to fight him without those annoying weights and that was pretty good. The Saiyan Overseer didn’t really waste any time and tried to hit the hybrid counselor with a powerful knee strike to his guts, but Jie Shan reacted rather quickly and used his Rapid Movement skill in order to fully dodge Nasu’s attack by a large margin, moving about three times faster than Nasu’s attack, showing he had indeed improve: Nasu wasn’t really holding back now, despite using his regular melee prowess to try and hit Jie. ”Swift move… This guy is improving!” he thought to himself, feeling rather proud of his student’s accomplishment.
Then, he spoke, revealing what he had done; not that Nasu didn’t already know, and that made the Overseer chuckle quite a bit and, without wasting any time, Nasu turned around quickly while moving his hips in a spinning motion, using his right heel to try and hit him in the side of the ribs, aiming to cause some serious damage. Of course he could still dodge again, but Nasu didn’t mind it all that much. – I didn’t fail to notice that, Lieutenant Colonel, but… How long can you keep up with that speed?! Hehehe! I see you breaking a sweat already, and I’m not going to go easy on you if you get winded! – Nasu warned him, but it was clear in his expression that he was having tons of fun with this little spar so far.
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 12, 2016 6:35:35 GMT -5
The Overseer wasted no time in responding to Jie Shan's talk. In a flash, the man spun on him, a kick already flying towards the hybrid. So fluid, thought Jie Shan, the Overseer was a master of his craft. As was expected, but Jie Shan knew that he was in for a hard battled ahead. He could have dodged it, if he used his rapid movement skills once again. But the Overseer had hit it right on the nose: he could not keep that kind of movement up forever. No, the technique took more out of him than simply standing there and taking the blow. And so he did.
The kick crashed right into Jie Shan's ribs. Pain shot through his body, but he grunted through it. He slid backwards, the force of the blow moving him. Damn, he thought, maybe he should have just taken the blow. It would have certainly felt a lot better. He coughed, but shot a grin at the Overseer. "Not bad, Overseer," he grunted, "But I'm just getting started! I just need to pace myself is all."
Jie Shan, very briefly, contemplated his next move. The thoughts in his mind rushed through the grey matter of his mind like lightning, zipping from neuron to neuron in a flash. His mind's eye was painting images of various strategies. And none of them seemed particularly appealing, given the difference between the two fighters. Screw it, he thought, he might as well get right into it at this point. With a mental sigh, Jie Shan jumped at the man, leg extended and aiming a kick right for the center of the Overseer's chest. A frontal assault was risky, he knew this, but it was the best chance he had right now. At least while he waited for his energy and stamina levels to return to normal.
Stamina: 3/3 Jump Kick: 393,177
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Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
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Nasu’s attack was precise and fast and Jie Shan barely had a window to react to it. The spinning kick hit right at its destined target, the hybrid’s ribs’ side and made him cough, but, still, he grinned, showing he still had plenty of fight inside of him and Nasu liked that. He also said that it wasn’t a bad move, and that he was just getting started and that made Nasu laugh out loud while his cocky grin became a very conceited smirk.
– Hahahaha! I was about to get bored, Lieutenant Colonel… But… Let’s see how you fare against the pinnacle of the Soy School martial arts… It’s time! – he exclaimed in the end, flaring his ki aura even brighter. Nasu clenched both his fists as he watched his opponent. Jie Shan, on the other hand, jumped at him with a very straightforward sort of attack, aiming to hit him with a kick to the chest. Nasu just quickly side stepped, completely avoiding that attack, and then he started it. – Final Revenger! – he exclaimed, almost as if he was announcing the attack to come. Nasu would then charge against Jie Shan, aiming to throw a powerful punch right at his face.
No matter the result of this initial assault, he would immediately reverse kick the hybrid high into the air and, if that worked, Nasu would follow quickly, soaring after him to further punch him up into the air again. Then, he would use all of his available speed and skill to catch up to him and grab his head and leap over behind him to knee strike his kidney, inflicting both huge pain as well as further launching him high into the air. Finally, if all worked out, he would use the superior speed to fly above him and double axe handle punch him down to the titled floor below, with the goal of inflicting huge amount of damage. If Nasu’s calculations were correct, although severely injured, Jie Shan would still be able to fight after such an assault.
Stamina: 5/5 > 2/5
Dodged High Jump Kick!
Used: [AD][OT-3] Final Revenger: First, the urser grabs his clenched fist as he charges at the opponent and punches them in their face before reverse side kicking them up into the air. Then, he flies after the opponent and punches them up into the air again. Next, he grabs the opponent by their head and leaps over behind to knee them up further into the air. Finally, the user flies up above the opponent and Double Axe Handle punches them down to the ground, inflicting a high amount of damage. [100% Damage] PL 4,000,000
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 13, 2016 13:53:29 GMT -5
Jie Shan returned with his own smirk. The Overseer was starting to get bored? Well, that would not do at all! Jie Shan was certainly excited. The pinnacle of the Soy School arts? This is exactly what he'd been hoping for!
The Overseer's ki flared ever brighter, his aura brilliant as he dodged Jie Shan's strike. The hybrid went flying by the Overseer. He quickly fell to his knees and slid on the floor, jumping up back onto his knees. He turned just in time to see the Overseer charging at him. A blindly fast fist came careening towards him and it crashed into his face. His vision blurred as it smashed into him, pain shooting through his entire head.
'Final Revenger'.
It certainly felt like something final. But the onslaught was not over yet. The Overseer was not even close to being done with Jie Shan yet. The Super Saiyan Overseer revere kicked Jie Shan, sending him high into the air. Jie Shan's power surged forth as he tried to control his ascent and pull himself into a controlled flight, but the Overseer was not going to give him that chance. The Overseer followed after him! With a rapid punch, sending him further into the air and out of control.
The Overseer burst ahead of him. With all of his speed, the Overseer rushed ahead of him, grabbing his head and flipping around to slam his knee in the kidney. And even then the assault was not over. The Saiyan Overseer flew ahead and, in a flash, punched him and sent him crashing down into the floor below.
Jie Shan smashed into the ground, his blade impressing itself into his back. His entire body was rocking and throbbing with pain. This was quite the predicament he was in. He was hurt, badly. Some lesson, he thought, he could barely focus. But he was going to give it right back.
He pulled himself to his feet and wiped the test from his body. Jie Shan spit, his spit more blood than saliva. He could barely stand, but he wasn't going down quite yet. "Well, Overseer," began Jie Shan, "You certainly did a number on me. Hell, I can barely stand. I feel like my ribs are broken. Damn, they probably are. But I'm not going down yet!"
And with that, Jie Shan launched himself at the Overseer! "Final Revenger!" He screamed. He'd been paying some attention. His body had learned the ins and outs of the technique the hard way. He launched his fist as the Overseer's face. If he was successful, he would mimic the reverse kick and the punch. He would fly up and grab the head and flip over the man, driving his knee into his foe. And finally, should he manage to make it that far, he would end with the double ax punch. He just hoped that he could make it all work, else all this effort would be wasted and he'd leave himself exposed. Stamina: 0/3
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
Nasu’s attack connected and, within every hit, he could feel Jie Shan’s body crumbling to his injuries. In the end, it was actually surprising he managed to get back to his feet, although Nasu had calculated and concluded he could. ”Hm… He is truly resilient. Good. Means I gave him proper credit.” he realized with some pride towards his own analytic skills. When the hybrid warrior finally managed to get back on his feet, Nasu had also landed in the titled floor in front of him, just a handful of feet away. Jie Shan said that he did a number on him and that made Nasu chuckle a bit. – That’s the power of the Soy School, but I still have one more secret to share once I can attest for sure that you’ve learned it! The Final Revengers uses every principle of the attacking pattern of our school so, if you can do it, then you’ve polished your skill enough to be considered an advanced student and almost graduate! – Nasu explained to him. – And good you are not going down. We are no wear near finished yet! – he added, chuckling a tad bit more.
And then, once Nasu finished speaking, Jie Shan launched himself towards him, screaming the name of the Technique. Nasu’s smirk widened as he quickly reacted in order to block the initial assault by crossing his forearms in front of his face. Jie’s punch connected to it, but Nasu fully blocked that part of the damage. Still, his reverse kick was way too fast for him to react properly now, and Nasu just grimaced a bit as he was hit and sent flying. The Final Revenger was perfect for leaving an opponent with his guard wide open and, before he could react, Jie Shan further punched him and then was already grabbing his head and knee striking his kidneys, making Nasu grunt and grimace. His expression changed to a much more serious one, as he quickly spun around in an attempt to block the double axe attack, which he just barely did.
Nasu was thrown to the titled floor with a lot of force and, once he hit the ground, he created a large crater, destroying a part of it. The damage was considerable and his battle suit had cracked all over it. When he got back, there was blood coming out of his mouth and he spit a heavy load of it and then cleaned the rest with the back of his white glove. The Overseer stared at the Lieutenant Colonel with a serious expression and spoke.
– Good. You mastered it. And it hurt. You are indeed improving. – he said. ”And I truly need to evolve, otherwise he and Komatsu will catch up with me! They are getting dangerously close.” he thought to himself, with a bit of concern in his mind, but not too much. Nasu exhaled a bit and spoke once again. – Catch your breath. It’s time to show you the ultimate skill of the Soy School, but you will need to have enough strength to use that. – he warned him and, with that, he folded his arms. Nasu’s breath was slowing down as he recovered from the little tiredness too.
Stamina 3/5 > 4/5
Blocked PL 800,000, took PL 1,821,184 worth of damage!
Base [+ x1/x0 Perm], Mastered Power [x6/x5], Great Ape (controlled) [x11/x10], Super Saiyan Full Power [x16/x15], Super Saiyan Third Grade [x19/x10], Super Saiyan 2 [x26/x25]
Mansion(50%), 100x Gravity Machine, Jian, 20% Shop, Martial Arts School/Dojo, X2 Sensu Bean, x2 Perfect Medical Machine, All Energy Capsule S, Unique Capsule
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 14, 2016 7:47:38 GMT -5
Jie Shan's satisfaction soared as he watched the Overseer spiral downward towards the floor. The man slammed into the ground, and a crater opened up on the floor with the force of the impact. Several cracks ran over the Overseer's battlesuit. Good, he thought, that means he felt it, despite blocking some of the blow. Even now, the Overseer spit blood.
Jie Shan did not like to think he took pleasure in causing pain. He, like many of Saiyan blood, did enjoy fighting. Even against overwhelming odds, and more often than not, that described the kind of battles that he had with the Overseer. So, it came as something as a surprise to him whenever he felt glad that he had wounded the Overseer. Perhaps it was simply a matter of Saiyan pride.
The Overseer confirmed that Jie Shan had mastered it. And Jie Shan bit his tongue, as he wanted to say 'Well, of course I did. Did you freaking see what I just did to you?' But he said nothing, lest he forget the tents of the Soy School. Instead, he simply nodded and gave the Overseer a small smile, and a thumb's up. The Overseer also mentioned taking a moment to catch his breath. Jie Shan sighed in relief. That attack had taken a lot out of him. More than he thought. The halfblood would be grateful to be able to take a moment to breathe.
"So, this ultimate skill," he began, speaking through panting, "Tell me more about it while we take a break. I'm pretty curios, you know?"
And he was. Komatsu had mastered it, but Jie Shan scarcely remembered anything from that day. Call him forgetful, or anything else, but he didn't. The Overseer would do well to remind him. Or perhaps the Overseer would simply seek to show him through example. Either way would work for Jie Shan; He simply wanted to see it done.
After all, he was eager to complete his training in the Soy Arts. So much had changed since he began it. And yet, his training remained incomplete. Jie Shan was not the type to leave things undone. He was going to finish it today, even if it killed him. He looked at the Overseer and waited for the man's response.
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
Nasu nodded when Jie Shan asked him to talk about this ultimate skill, and that also made Nasu crack a subtle grin; he was really proud of the technique his father was able to develop, and the way it worked in a much more interesting than most of the ultimate techniques people would develop. Nasu chuckled a bit too before starting speaking.
– Its name is Spirit of the Saiyans and it’s not a technique that can be used by itself. No. Instead, it is a way to absurdly increase the power of any technique you might use. – he started. – Whenever you focus your inner power, allowing yourself to feel the bonds with your saiyan comrades, you will be able to summon a hidden power that comes from both our saiyan blood and the bonds only true battle comrades can have. The more allies you have fighting by your side, or just cheering on you, the better. This surge of power comes in the form of a teal-colored energy that takes over your attack, in the same tone as the super saiyan’s eye color. – he added, chuckling a bit more. – Also, you will feel like the Great Ape in you is awakening the moment you fire it. It’s truly something out of ordinary, but words are not worthy to fully describe it. You will feel it soon enough. – Nasu said as he waited for the hybrid super saiyan to recover his stamina.
Nasu, on the other hand, seemed to be fully recovered from his earlier assault, despite the injuries he held on his body.
Base [+ x1/x0 Perm], Mastered Power [x6/x5], Great Ape (controlled) [x11/x10], Super Saiyan Full Power [x16/x15], Super Saiyan Third Grade [x19/x10], Super Saiyan 2 [x26/x25]
Mansion(50%), 100x Gravity Machine, Jian, 20% Shop, Martial Arts School/Dojo, X2 Sensu Bean, x2 Perfect Medical Machine, All Energy Capsule S, Unique Capsule
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"Quotes are a waste of time. Actions speak louder than words."
Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on May 15, 2016 17:55:29 GMT -5
Jie Shan nodded in understanding. He considered it tactically. It was an auxiliary technique, based on the bonds between warriors. He knew that the Soy Arts had been developed out of harvesting the potential of Saiyan Squads, so it only made sense that the ultimate technique of the school reflected this.
On a deeper level, it set his heart alight. Such as exciting prospect, and such a powerful one. His Saiyan blood surged, and he eagerly awaited to see the technique in action as the Overseer had promised. "I see, Overseer," said Jie Shan, "I'm looking forward to seeing and feeling the full force of the technique in action."
He shot the Overseer a grin. "I suppose that given how you haven't blasted me away with it yet, the fight took more out of you than you anticipated, eh?" He flexed his eyebrows, his grin even wider. He was not truly mocking the Overseer, instead simply trying to make light conversation for the sake of fun. And besides, the more they spoke, the better chance he would have to catch his breath. He needed it after the smack down he had taken from the Final Revenger. Another blow like that and he might fall completely over at this rate. And that would surely reflect poorly on the Counselor, if he collapsed at the last stage of training.
But he steeled himself for whatever came next. 'Whatever' was probably going to be the fury of a planet busting ki beam coming at him, but he thought he was at least ready for it. If not, well, the Overseer would probably not turn him to ash right off the bat. No, too messy. The Overseer wasn't that violent. Was he?
Stamina: 2/3
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