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The Western lands of Earth held many surprises. From forests to wastelands, Baalbatos's eyes scanned the horizons. He was searching, searching for something. Nothing in particular, but definitely something. Anything to kill the boredom, really. His days for the last few weeks had simply been tending the store that he had opened, as well as attending to the business of his and Lord Qrowen's fledgling empire. Well, he cautioned, it was not much of an empire yet, unless one counted a few buildings and the beginning of a civilian colony as an empire. Baalbatos himself certainly did not. But, titles mattered he supposed. Maybe more than facts. He did not complain.
Instead, he simply sought relief in the wonderful sights of the Earthen landscape. Earth could be rather lovely at times, he had decided. A shame that the places he called home could not be half so beautiful. A pity that he would have to leave some day. But not before properly exploring the planet some. He flew around the west, looking for anything of interest.
He flew over the occasional village or farm house, but nothing caught his eye. It seemed as if Earth were hiding her secrets from the demon. He could not find anything at all. The lilac skinned demon sighed as he flew. Perhaps this would be a wasted trip after all. He supposed he could always take the opportunity to hunt or to do some trading, or Hell, even training. But that's not what he'd been looking for. He'd been looking for adventure, excitement! Something new! But the horizon was a cruel, barren mistress, devoid of any signs of life, any signs of something more. It felt almost as if he were back home in Makaii, a land that seemed utterly devoid of defining features at times, but stretched forever.
But perhaps she was not so cruel as Baalbatos thought. He saw it, a great citadel rising in the distance. Well, he thought, that's new. Or, at least, new to him. "Let's check that out," muttered Baalbatos, "Perhaps whoever rules that fortress can treat me to some entertainment."
And with that, Baalbatos flew towards it, red aura burning all around him, wind rushing through his silvery hair. The mass of his weights dragged down towards the Earth, but he ignored them for the time being. He had something much more interesting to attend to at the moment.
Saki was training some of his special ops in baiyonet drills on the outside of the citadel. He then heard a soilder yell. “Who is that?” Saki turned and saw a purple skinned lifeform which his mechanical mind saw as a demon. “Men, it’s okay…go back to training and practice your katas.”
He now turned to the demon as his soilders went off to train. “You’re a new face, hello. I am Crane Master Saki…I own this citadel…are you looking for a place in the market place? We take entrepeneurs in our city for the sake of free trade and market.” He smiled, “Come on in, I’ll show you around..” He motioned to the demon to come as they walked to the door which slid open for both the former demon and the present demon.
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Well, thought Baalbatos, as he approached, this was quite the welcome. As he came closer, he saw a squad of what seemed to be soldiers, led by a man with short black hair. Interestingly enough, he noted, the man who led them seem to have no life signature. Very interesting, indeed. He'd met a hand full of people in his life who did not radiate life energy, like this man.
The man introduced himself as Baalbatos finally came in range. 'Crane Master Saki', an interesting title. Just what did he mean by Crane Master? Baalbatos raised a hand in greeting. "Thank you, Crane Master," said Baalbatos, "For the warm welcome. And the offer of the tour. I'd be glad to see your citadel and what mysteries it offers. Particularly this market place of yours."
He followed after the man, eager to see just what this Earthling castle might offer him.
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The demon walked with the crane master into the city. The Overwatch Citadel was a domed base headquarters for the former lanza that saki inherited. The reality bending and digital rendering technology made the city much bigger…in fact it was as big as central city and even had a castle in the center of it that was as big as 25 football stadiums combined in diameter.
There were many structures as the first place you entered would be the market place. They had girls posing in the hottest fashions on the earth right now. 21 year old girls wearing designer dresses and blouses along with many shoes. The girls were on the streets posing while these shops had customers buying designer clothes and accessaries.
“As you can see this is the fashion sector of the citadel….it’s much larger on the inside. So yeah, as we’re coming up, we have the clothing of former demon lords. “
Soon there was a picture of garlic junior wearing his gi of the garlic family. There were many types of clothes being made here, many types of fabrics and tailors making clothes then sending the surplus to the underground warehouse which was right by his labs and such.
He now smiled as they walked up to the food court. He took a seat and motioned for Baal to take a seat as well.
“So, tell me a bit about yourself, what business do you operate? What is your trade…mine is teaching and training.” He then motioned a woman to tell Baal was the special was and what was on the menu..this being an outdoor Chinese restarant.
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Much larger on the inside? Baalbatos had heard that one before. But still, he found it interesting that the fortress had a fashion district. Not something that Baalbatos himself thought was neccesary, but it was not his citadel to command. And, if it brought in business, who could complain about that?
Baalbatos followed the man to the food court. Ah, he thought, food. How very hungry he was. Earth foods especially made his mouth water, as they were quite the delicacy to him. For a moment, he considered excusing himself to go eat, but he did not want to be rude to his host. Who had actually just asked him to tell the man about himself.
"Well," began Baalbatos, "My name is Baalbatos. A pleasure, Crane Master. I consider myself a bit of a... everyman when it comes to trading. I buy and sell as I can, whatever I can, taking advantage of when I can get a good deal on stock."
Baalbatos could have said more. But his interest was now in what the man had said. "Training and teaching?" He asked, "What kind? If I had to assume, it would be tied to your title of 'Crane Master', would it not?"
Saki was now seated in the food court district. The snipers kept an eye on saki and the new guy, ready to take him down at a moment’s notice in their scopes. They just sat in the windows and rooftops, doing their jobs to protect saki. It was his Secret Service Company. He was in charge of the whole citadel and it’s fuctions. It would be a shame if something happened, if something triggered Baal. Saki mechanical mind sent a message over the radio to keep guarding but only to use rubber bullets earlier after the Crane Master met the demon in the outside.
He sat down and popped a normal conversation starter, asking what his name was and what his trade was. This was the reply…
” "My name is Baalbatos. A pleasure, Crane Master. I consider myself a bit of a... everyman when it comes to trading. I buy and sell as I can, whatever I can, taking advantage of when I can get a good deal on stock."”
Saki began to snicker a bit. “Well I am always looking for traders…I wanted to start a team but with my current position as not only the crane master, having to give criminals a honorable way of living and training with integrity and dignity instead of being drug addicts, drunks, adrenalin junkies, thieves, shotcallers, ballers, hustlers, custlers which are People who hustle for an addiction/fix and gamblers. They don’t have to cheat on their partners anymore…it’s a better school now then from long ago.”
He now told the lady that was there to give his demon trader Sweet and Sour Jerk Pork With Rice and Chickpeas with 10 dragon ball sized chicken ball and pork ribs with a glass of whiskey and scotch for a beverage. Afterward he said he wanted 10 big glasses of rye for Baalbatos and another 10 for himself, the table being really big to hold all of this food. He also ordered for himself some shanghai noodles and chicken balls. He also ordered 10 springrolls and 10 eggrolls for both Baalbatos and himself.
The woman now went off and Baalbatos contined…
” "Training and teaching? What kind? If I had to assume, it would be tied to your title of 'Crane Master', would it not?”
Saki then smiled. “Yes it will be tied to crane master…I can train you to be like the Devil with two stances that may interest you…the devil’s claw and the devil’s rod. It’s a stance that is deadly…breaking bones and piercing flesh deadly. It would be good to stop those pesky collectors…wouldn’t it?”
The woman came back with the orders, Saki and Baalbatos getting their meals and drinks. Crane Master Saki now took a swig of one of his rye drinks and then after putting the glass to his lips and drinking. He slapped it down on the table, only really at a battle fighting power of 10% of his full power in deus ex.
”But yes, it is tied to my title…but I have another title…Fearless Kingpin. I own this citadel…I own this…you don’t have to think about robing and stealing from other people and lying and cheating…you can do more then trade…you could be a great martial arts warrior. You could protect something which you value over your own life. You can train with me and get your mind trained as well as your body and spirit. You can do this. The first bit of training is telling me your former alleigence…I respect evil…but evil can’t be too chaotic…that why there are what’s known as gods for the sake of balance of life and destruction…because if evil gets too dark…they come to whipe it out cuz they feel ‘threated’ from the deeds of wickedness and villainy.”
He now began to finish up before starting to eat. ”Well, I was a human first off 1,300 years ago then became a demon at 15 years old from the Makai juice…it tainted my organs and gave me agelessness. Soon I did what most demons did and conquered, I even recently became a knight in the kold empire under someone who is ‘quite’ the kold hearted killer. I then got sick after breaking the seal…it was only 1,000 years…then after getting out…I got sick and weak…afterwards, I became an artificial makaioshin…a demonic cyborg or android so to speak. I could teach you the art of shadowboxing…then once you master shadowboxing there’s a fun technique you can do after it…you have to shadowbox for awhile to do it. It’s called multiform and after you have a mastery of your stance while shadowboxing your clone…you’ll be at the level of master.”
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Baalbatos joined the Crane Master in the food court, sitting with him at the table. Well, he thought, this place was certainly more varied than he thought. It was more like a small city than a fortress. A very impressive city. It seemed that the mechanical Crane master was really in charge of something special here. If Baalbatos were a more petty man, he might be jealous. This citadel was almost like something he was trying to build. Perhaps he would have to take notes while he was here, keep things in mind for his own building in the months and years to come.
The man explained his purpose. Always looking for traders, he said, and this caught Baalbatos's interest. Perhaps he could bring the ship down for a day or two and open it for business, see if he could make any money with it. He was always keeping an eye out for business opportunities like this, and this citadel seemed a decent place to try his luck. Of course, he thought, if the business in Satan City stayed good, he would have no real reason to move.
And he went on to talk about giving the down trodden or the broken a new purpose with his work. A noble goal, thought Baalbatos, but perhaps not an entirely practical one. If Baalbatos knew anything about the kinds of people that the man said he sought out, it was that they were broken. Broken in mind, broken in body, broken in spirit. And, usually, they tended to stay broken. Once a man was broken, thought Baalbatos, it was hard for him to be reforged. He'd seen it before.
The man signaled for a worker to bring them food. How nice, thought Baalbatos, he was just starting to get hungry. And a few drinks never hurt anyone as well. The ki-less man had given him quite the varied platter. Baalbatos licked his lips and reached for one of the chicken balls. "Thank you, friend," he said as he lifted the food to his mouth, "I greatly appreciate the meal."
He began to eat as the man continued to talk. He spoke of evil. Or training. Of allegiance. It was almost kind of funny. Here they were, sitting down to eat, and this man was getting to be all heavy about the world. "My allegiance?" Asked Baalbatos, "Well, for a time, my only allegiance was to myself. Now, I work for an individual, trying to help him reclaim his birthright. Perhaps a hard goal, it's certainly a thankless one, but I think it's a goal well worth it, nonetheless."
But Baalbatos was definitely interested in the training the man was talking about. Not only was Baalbatos always on the prowl for money, he was always on the prowl for a little power as well. He'd speak after listening to the man, who went into his quite interesting history. A human tainted by the waters of Makaii? He raised an eyebrow in interest. That certainly sounded like home, tainting those who come too close to it. But what else interested Baalbatos, was the fact that he'd transitioned into a mechanical man. How interesting, thought Baalbatos, the man has had quite the life.
"You speak of training and martial arts," said Baalbatos, "Tell me more. I'm definitely interested in this school of yours, if you're still looking for students."
Saki said a lot, a whole mouthful while the demon was eating. He then ate his food and drank his liquor as the demon stated that his alliegence was to someone who wanted to reclaim a lost empire. He finished eating his chicken balls and put the drink to his mouth to wash it down after listening and replied. “Well, as long as you don’t feel used…it would be for the best if you got stronger and faster for this goal if you wish. I’m a helper of sorts…you wish to assist someone then you should do what ever it took to help them but remember…if you’ll die for them, they should in term die for you…if the relationship is one way, then someone’s being treated like a bitch…demons don’t like being bitches to anyone…I can attest to that.”
He then finished as he spoke of having an interest to training. ”You wish to train under me? That would be quite the perked interest in what I call kung fu….Well here’s what I’ll do. You’ll come to a special training ground I have On the Eastern Islands, you’ll stay there in the crane dojo which is a high end training area for the crane school techniques…I could teach you the art of body or ‘tai-jutsu’ to get your physical body stronger. I take it you know how to manipulate energy and can fly as well as sense out energies?”
Saki now took a big bite out of a chicken ball and sipped on his shanghai noodles…loving his food then finishing up with a swing of rye to wash it down before speaking…”AH! That was a good dish I just finished, but yeah, we’ll work on your form with the grace and power that will come with it. It’s more then pushups and situps…it’s a way of life, it’s present’s a way to keep good health…”
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"Yes," began Baalbatos, "I so agree that becoming more powerful would be a worthwhile means of achieving this goal." Baalbatos gave the man a small grin. "And," he added, "I assure you that I am not anyone's... 'bitch', as you put it." No, thought Baalbatos, he was much too smart to be somebody else's tool. Or at least he liked to think so. Lord Qrowen might treat him harshly at times, but he was just as important as the Kold Demon in this regard.
"Yes," answer Baalbatos, "I assure you, I know all the basics of combat and energy manipulation. One does not survive Makaii without learning at least some tricks like that."
Baalbatos took a moment to eat, sipping at his rye. Very good, he thought, this Earthling food was very good indeed. He could eat it everyday and never get tired of it. Of course, that probably would not be good for his health.
"So," continued Baalbatos, "I will meet you at these training grounds of yours. If possible, I'd like to start as soon as possible, tomorrow if you can manage, Crane Master. Though, if you take issue with this, please, let me know and I'm more than willing to adjust my schedule."
Saki smiled and gave him a fearless badge which was like a winter wolf. “Well this will direct you to the training ground, it has a map installed into it and it’s voice activated…as well as energy sensitive. Since you have the badge, it only answers to you. So any time you wish for training or wanting to chill or wanting work. Just activate the badge.”
He now finished his food as baal finished his. “Here is something to get you started…” He gave the demon business man a wallet of credit cards. “That’s for your business so you can expand. There’s nine hundred and fifty five zeni on each card, 10 cards…plus a grocery card to charge your purchases on for food, a delivery card so you can order food from delivery businesses of all kinds and a card which will be good at any bar on earth.”
Saki then nodded, “There’s no doubt that your no bodies’ bitch…you just have your reason and wouldn’t take kindly to being manipulated or used ‘lied to’,” The crane master then took out a book from a slot going down his wrist and grabbed it with his right hand. “This is the basic style of the devil’s claw, a bone breaking style…tomorrow we’ll begin your introduction into the crane school with your basic fight evaluation, just seeing how skilled you are…you’ll be trained by me only…as well as being giving free use over the training items and tools.”
He then smiled. “The fee will be loyalty to me…I won’t bait your shit out…your going to be a strong master in martial arts in a few weeks…we just have to train hard, you look like you can practice block and striking techniques for hours without getting bored or tired…mentally. You have a strong mind and a good heart in ya. I don’t think you’ll ever have to worry about being betrayed after this. Your comrade that you wish to assist…tell him of your choice to begin training with me. There should be no secrets between us and maybe down the road you can introduce me to your ‘friend’.” He now had an armed escort to stand with baal along with a torist guide to show him around the citadel if he choice to, or escort him out if he wanted to leave; the choice being baal’s.
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The man handed Baalbatos a badge. Supposedly, it held the directions to the Crane compound. Baalbatos smiled and nodded, slipping it into the pocket of his cloak. Further more, he handed Baalbatos a series of cards. Credit cards, he noted. Well, thought Baalbatos, this was a pleasant surprise. Again, these went into his cloak. And even more goodies, noted Baalbatos, this time in the form of a small book, which was also deposited into Baalbatos's cloak shortly after. It seemed that they were done here.
Baalbatos rose from his seat and gave the Crane Master a small bow. "Thank you, Crane Master," said Baalbatos, "For everything. I look forward to our training. I'll see you tomorrow."
And with that, Baalbatos made his way out of the Citadel, and it was not long before the demon was back in the air, flying back towards the ship that he called his home.
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