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The Hero had just arrived but he had already adjusted himself for the show; a good meal and a spot.. on top of the Arena so that no one could bother him. He couldn’t remember what the fight was for at first but if it between Jie Shan and Nasu’s brother.. he knew he could have expected quite a good show. Among the people he had fought Jie Shan only ever made him push over his own limits, which had quite given him a good idea of the Saiyan. “Strong but at least he is not an asshole.. If only all Saiyans could have been like that..” - he muttered.
He had met only one Saiyan on Earth, he had thought of him as ‘the prince of all blablabla’. He could just remember his bad manners if he had to be honest but he didn’t give him that much importance.. he could barely remember how the two met.
That aside, he looked down for a brief moment and set his eyes on Nasu and the other ones around his privileged spot. He narrowed his eyes slightly, tilting his head to the sides.. he had no idea of who the woman is but he could recognize the tall guy. “I hope the guy has given Cabba some peace..” - he thought to himself. He could remember the last time Cabba was treated worse than an enslaved kid.. he shook his head in disappointment.
He shifted his gaze upon the match once more, the two had already begun by the looks of it with quite a series of fancy moves. He tilted his head slightly while he took out some canned food and began to eat it as he watched. “I think that was the only way to counter it but it isn’t good at all to use such techniques right off the bat..” - he muttered, chewing on the contents of his canned food slowly.
He continued to watch in mild interest, it was definitely worth coming for but what had truly surprised him was the moment that Komatsu turned Super Saiyan; as a matter of fact he was choking on his food. He coughed heavily, gulping all of it down shortly after. “W-what?! Oh.. damn. Things will be difficult for Jie Shan now.. I doubt he can deal with a Super Saiyan that easily..” - he said to himself, eyes wide open as he shifted his gaze upon Miso.
He let out a grunt, shaking his head slowly as his eyes narrowed in annoyance. “That guy really needs a hobby.. either that or I’ll have to punch him to the other side of the Galaxy some day..” - he muttered.
The Hero thought Jie Shan would have been for in a few minutes if he didn’t come up with something but it didn’t take long for his expectations to turn high again; Jie Shan had just turned into a Super Saiyan! “Hah! I knew I couldn’t have missed this fight at all..” - he said to himself, raising a fist in the air in order to raise the Captain’s spirits. “Punch him right in the face Jie!” - he exclaimed.
Post by King of All on Mar 20, 2016 15:13:06 GMT -5
Komatsu's Spirit Cannon burned through Jie's attack with ease and smacked, point blank into th eHybrid as it sent him flying away. Komatsu grinned once more as he lifted himself off of the ground so that he could have a better look at Jie's expression once he had been blasted. However, what he saw started to make Komatsu's heart sink. He wasn't moving... at least, he barely was. There was blood pouring out in abundance and Koma could easily sense the man's power level dropping fast.
"Ah shit... I didn't mean to hit him that hard... Guess I should stabitize him so he doesn't die. Man... I was really hoping he could transform..." Komatsu grumbled as he made sure to not approach Jie Shan just yet, looking over to his older brother as if he waited for him to call off the fight and declare him a winner. the faster he did so, the faster he could save Jie Shan from dying. However, his brother's expressoin changed quickly and Komatsu looked back towards his foe.
"Cheeky bastard..." He said as he watched Jie Shan pop some form of capsule in his mouth. Instantly, Komatsu felt his power fire right back up to it's maximum, and then it just kept on going! The whole arena would begin to shake as it was now feeling the pressure of two super saiyans! Komatsu couldn't help but laugh as a smirk appeared on his face once more. He threw his fist forward, aiming at Jie from his spot in the air before speaking.
"Well it's about damned time! I thought I was going to have to start spouting some family bullshit to get your blood boiling enough! This is what I've been waiting for! And this is where our real fight starts!" Komatsu exclaimed happily. The young saiyan looked totally content with the sudden change of situation, he was grinning ear to ear as he challenged the new super saiyan. He fired up his aura around him once.
He waited for Jie Shan to gather his sword and slipped back into a more comfortable, airborne fighting stance as he waited.
"Alright then Captain! Show me this new found strength of yours!" He taunted just as excitedly, moving his palm back and forth as if to call Jie Shan over to him.
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Kyuri bit her tongue before taunting Miso further. Clearly he was pissed off and not to be bothered, betting all of one's money could definitely put strain on a person. She looked back to Nasu when he spoke of stopping the fight as Super Saiyans if needed an dKyuri raised an eyebrow at that statement. After all these years, she was still no where close to summoning the strength needed for the legendary transformation. It didn't bother her at all however, as she had other strengths that had proven useful to the alliance time and time again. Hell, it was her skill that helped build most of what was on planet Natto anyways.
"Right well, you guys have fun with that one" She said calmly, not about to throw herself into that fray as she sat back to watch the fight continue.
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WC: 529 Total WC: 2202 Stamina 2/3 (was at 1/3 after Spirit Cannon)
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Mar 21, 2016 8:34:57 GMT -5
(PL after Zenkai and Transformation: 1,966,393/1,815,132)
Jie Shan would be happy to oblige the captain. Hell, he was eager even. The power felt so... exhilirating. It coursed through every fiber of his being. He felt so powerful, like the energy was just below the surface, waiting to burst out. And it seemed like it was going to burst out of him. His mind was on fire. That feeling of rage and desperation was buzzing below the surface of his mind, a dark sea of violence and power. His muscles twitched anxiously. He was wasting too much time just standing around. He wanted to get going, turn this fight back into something worth watching. It was certainly exciting again. Two Super Saiyans, he thought, battling it out. And he was one of them. He'd had his doubts about the whole thing, but now his mind practically demanded he throw himself in head first.
Jie Shan dashed through the air at the boy, his blade extended. As he flew, he began to channel energy into the blade, as he had a hundred times before. But never before had he had the almight power of the Super Saiyan backing his attacks. He was going to put so much energy into this attack, it was absurd. He felt as if he could destroys entire cities, Hell maybe even planets, with the attack he was about to use. And the attack was going to take a lot out of him, he knew that much. Some small, quiet part of him also knew it might not exactly be wise to put so much into one attack, but the rest of him was committed full heartedly, drunk on the power of the Super Saiyan.
He continued his flight path towards Komatsu, power still charging in his blade.
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Post by King of All on Mar 21, 2016 11:29:02 GMT -5
'Even his transformed power is crazy... I was hoping to knock him out before he could get Zenkai like I did. Man this is such a pain in the ass... it's fun, but still a pain in the ass.' Komatsu thought to himself as he had taunted Jie Shan to attack him. What the saiyan warrior did though, caused Komatsu to raise an eyebrow. He was fueling an insane amount of power into his attack! Easily doubling the power level he was putting into his sword as he charged Komatsu. This wasn't good, it wasn't good at all! Komatsu had been fighting at his super saiyan level a bit longer than Jie Shan and had used up some energy already... he wasn't sure he was going to be able to muster up the strength to beat this.
No... He wasn't going to let himself be taken out by his first attack as a Super Saiyan. There was no way! He needed to find more power inside of himself to use! As the idea crossed Komatsu's mind, the young Super Saiyan flared up his ki around himself, charging it up, and up and up until it reached his peak.
'It's not enough, I need more!' He thought angrily as he let out a cry, his golden aura increasing even farther as he channeled his desire and need for more power. If he couldn't achieve this, then there was a very good chance Jie Shan's attack would kill him! Then, all at once, Komatsu felt his power surge, like a bolt of lightning running through his body!
[Unlocked Super Saiyan Second Grade. PL 2,005,052! Stamina 3/3]
'That's it!' He mentally cheered to himself as he quickly brought both hands in front of him, grasping them together as he pointed his index fingers at Jie and his thumbs towards the sky, as if he was a child pointing an imaginary gun. However, as Komatsu pushed all of his energy into his hands, a massive orb of energy appeared before him, completely obscuring the young Super Saiyan from his opponents view.
"RAIL GUN" He cried out as he summoned up every ounce of his fighting Spirit to fire at Jie before the new born Super Saiyan could get too close. The giant red ball of energy surged forward Towards Jie Shan at incredible speeds. The blast crashed into Jie Shan's own bladed attack and began to struggle to push the saiyan backwards.
The sheer amount of power being thrown around by the two made the whole arena begin to shake and tremble once more.
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WC: 421 Total WC: 2,623 Stamina 0/3 Used OT-3 Rail Gun + 15% Warriors Spirit PL 2,141,109
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Mar 21, 2016 12:15:47 GMT -5
Jie Shan continued to fly right towards his opponent, the energy in his blade arcing like mad. The air whipped at his golden hair as he flew towards his foe. His teal eyes were focused intently on his Super Saiyan adversary. This, he thought, was going to hurt the man. He was putting everything he had into this attack. It had damn well better hurt the man.
But something here was strange. Jie Shan's eyes narrowed. A brief flash of energy crossed his mind, a stark increase in power. His teal eyes narrowed as he focused in on Komatsu. And then he realized just what had occurred. The young captain had ascended even further. Had he unlocked some new form of golden Super Saiyan power? No matter, thought Jie Shan, he still had the upper hand at the moment.
But it seemed the young captain was not going down without a fight. The boy pointed his fingers at Jie Shan, like he was holding a gun. What in the world, thought Jie Shan, is he doing? And then the answer came quickly: the boy shot a giant red ball of energy straight at Jie Shan. It sped towards Jie Shan, careening towards him with a great power.
Jie Shan held up his blade. The ball of energy crashed into his blade. Jie Shan's entire body shook against the force of the attack. He stood there, locked against it. His heart surged with energy. The power stirred deep in him, something in his spirit. With a cry, Jie Shan forced his blade forward, pouring even more energy into it.
Jie Shan cut through the ball of energy, bisecting it with the force of his blade and energy. He flew through the energy as it exploded around him, still holding some of the charge in his blade. He drew even closer to Komatsu and finally he swung: he slashed at the boy, aiming the flat of the blade at the boy's head. If he hit, Jie Shan would try to use the force of the blow to slam the boy down towards the ground.
"Go down and stay down!" Roared Jie Shan as he swung.
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Post by King of All on Mar 21, 2016 12:43:35 GMT -5
'Shit shit shit! I put everything I had into that!' Komatsu cursed silently as Jie Shan approached at a near blinding speed. He brought his hands up in an attempt to redirect the sword if Jie tried to stab him, but the man turned the blunt end of his sword to his head, knocking him hard. The force of the impact was instant as Komatsu was send crashing down into the ground underfoot, smacking it loudly as a large crater was created from the impact.
Komatsu lay still in the crater he had created, eyes half closed as blood actively spilled from the side of his head. His body was severely injured not from Jie's attack, but from the sheer force of the impact against the ground. He had a few broken bones, several cuts and heavy blood loss. It seemed as is that was it, Jie Shan had won.
However... even through the severe pain Komatsu was feeling, the complete exhaustion of his body, the young saiyan slowly pushed himself back to his feet. He honestly looked like some creature from beyond the grave... he was breathing heavily, and his eyes seemed blank. Litteraly, the teal of his eyes were all but gone, leaving nothing but white eyes blankly staring up at his opponent. He remained slouched over as he remained in place, silent and unmoving for a moment. Then, all of a sudden, his energy flared up around his body again, almost as if he was about to charge up another insanely powerful attack.
Kyuri abruptly stood up once she saw the look in her grandson's eyes. It was hard for her to mistake what it was she was seeing, as she had seen Tomo fall into the same state time and time again. Komatsu was, in fact, unconscious, his body was now acting on instinct alone, pushing itself beyond any form of limitation the boy had, ignoring the pain that he felt. Komatsu would continue to fight until he, or his enemy were dead.
"Nasu... call the fight! Koma's going into a battle mode and he won't stop until he's killed!" Kyuri exclaimed in a panic, hoping that Jie Shan wouldn't hit Komatsu in this state. If he did, then that would be it... Komatsu would feel he had to fight, and wouldn't stop, no matter how weak he was...
---------------- WC: 393 Total WC: 3,016
Stamina: 0/3 Komatsu is technically unconscious! he looks like a Zombie, if he's hit once, he'll try to keep fighting until he's dead!
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Mar 21, 2016 12:58:05 GMT -5
Jie Shan did it. The blow sent Komatsu flying downward, like some kind of tiny, child sized meteor bursting out of the sky. His foe cut through the air like a fallen star, and Jie Shan watched with teal eyes as he finally crashed into the ground. Dust and debris sprang up around his foe, and as the dust cleared Jie Shan saw that his foe had left a crater on impact.
"Damn," whispered Jie Shan, panting, "Maybe I hit him too hard..." Slowly, the rage began to fade from his brain. Was it over? Jie Shan couldn't tell. His mind went searching for the ki signature of the young captain. He was still alive, Jie Shan realized. And for that, the halfblood was glad. Maybe now the match might finally end...
But no. The child stood up again, his aura burning bright around him. Jie Shan's eyes narrowed. How, he thought? How was he getting up from that? Just how strong was this kid? It seemed as if the boy was charging up another attack. Damn it, Jie Shan cursed mentally, he was out of it himself. His chest rose and fell rapidly, and he tried to summon up any power but he could not. This, he thought, was going to get ugly.
Things were not good. Jie Shan was defenseless at the moment, and he had no desire to push the child further. If he did, somebody was going to end up dead, and that was the exact opposite of what he wanted. Jie Shan pulled his blade up again and held it between him and the boy, staring at him across the distance. His teal eyes watched the boy carefully, and Jie Shan slipped into a defensive stance. If the boy attacked again, he'd just have to try and dodge..
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The fight was coming to an end and seemed like the two super saiyans were determined to define the match with their next attack. Jie Shan was the first and he started charging all of his power on his blade. The power output was growing rapidly and Nasu grew immediately concerned with that. He stared back at his fellow super saiyan comrades and they both nodded in agreement. Nasu, then immediately flared his bright golden but calm ki aura as he instantly and effortlessly turned into a full powered super saiyan, with his power level skyrocketing, dwarfing the power of the two warriors down at the fighting arena. His hair wasn’t as bright as theirs, since the energy was much more contained, but the teal eyes had the same energy inside of it.
[Super Saiyan Full Power. Current PL: 2,919,200]
Following Nasu, Karota was the first to get up from her chair and flare her powerful and fiery-like ki aura around her body. She wasn’t ascending to a regular super saiyan form, but, instead, she was going one step further, to the Super Saiyan Second Grade, the natural evolution of the initial legendary transformation, the only one in which the super saiyan could ascend into without the need of a special training. Due to her hybrid DNA, Karota’s hair grew quite a bit upon transforming, and it became much more spiked and glowing just like the super saiyans down there. Her emerald-colored eyes became teal, as it was a rule for the transformation, and he muscle mass increase slightly, still keeping her body feminine in look, but much stronger.
[Super Saiyan Second Grade. Current PL: 894,005]
And finally, Miso also threw his chair away, destroying it when it hit the wall of the stand they were in and charging his power. He was much more vocal than his fellow super saiyans as he transformed, screaming as he released all the power he had inside himself. – AAAAHHHHHH!!! – and with that scream, the bright golden aura was flared and his hair became spikier and golden and as it was expected, his eyes became teal. Miso’s hair didn’t bristle a lot due to being quite long, and the weight managed to keep it down. Just like Karota, he was going for the natural evolution of the basic super saiyan form, and growing bulkier than he was. However, the Saiyan General didn’t stop at that and, at the same time, he kept on infusing ki energy on his muscles in order to grow far stronger, becoming a real monster in terms of muscular mass, almost doubling in size.
[Super Saiyan Second Grade. Current PL: 894,005] [Used [ST-1] Bulking. Current PL: 1,149,435/510,860]
With the two super saiyans ready to interfere, they continued to watch the fight, awaiting for the outcome of the battle. Impressive enough, Komatsu had managed to unlock his Super Saiyan Second Grade form, increasing his power level much more and surpassing Jie’s own power level by a low margin. ”It won’t be enough! Jie Shan managed to harvest more power!” Nasu thought to himself, narrowing his now teal eyes as he saw his younger brother pointing his finger at the hybrid and fire a full-powered Rail Gun. – It’s over. Nasu, we must act. – Karota stated, staring at the Overseer, but he didn’t move. – No! The battle must end first! We need to intervene to save his life, but we can’t leave the outcome open to discussion! – he answered with a serious but concerned tone. Karota frowned her brows. – He may die, you know?! – her tone became slightly angry, but it was Miso who answered now. – He would rather die that have us stop the fight before the end. He has shown his pride! We can’t take that away from the brat! – and Nasu nodded, ending the discussion.
Jie Shan managed to split the Rail Gun in half with his Perfect Stormbreaker, living to its name, and the remaining of the released power hit Komatsu hard. The hybrid hit him with the blunt side of the blade; otherwise the young super saiyan would be most certainly dead now. He was send to the ground by the sheer power of the impact and that must have broken his bones, and when they thought it was over, Komatsu still managed to get back on his feet, impressing everyone, expect for Nasu, who widened his eyes. ”Shit!... That’s like… Mom’s battle mode!” he thought to himself, as a drop of cold sweat ran down his temple. The young Overseer gulped with the realization that he had inherited such a dangerous trait, but before he could put much more thought into it, Kyuri spoke to him, stating that he would end up killing himself. Nasu nodded to his grandmother. – I know! I’m on it! – he said in a hasty tone as he flared his golden aura flew towards the arena with his full speed, being followed by Miso and Karota.
Nasu flew towards Komatsu like a rocket and with a precise attack, he hit the back of Komatsu’s neck with the knife of his hand aiming to throw him unconscious with the technique of the Wolf School he had been learning with Karota. At the same time, Miso and Karota headed straight towards Jie Shan, putting themselves in between the two super saiyan warriors. Right now there was five super saiyans inside the arena, and the crowd was going completely nuts, all extremely pride of the power the Saiyan Alliance had now.
– Sheath your sword, Cap! Heh! – he absurdly bulky super saiyan Miso said. – It’s over, Jie. You won. – Karota stated.
Should Komatsu fall unconscious, Nasu would immediately turn to the crowd, raising both his arms and speaking out lout. – My fellow saiyans and members of the Saiyan Alliance! You’ve witnessed not only the birth of two new super saiyans, but the birth of the new Counselor of the Saiyan Alliance, Lieutenant Colonel Jie Shan Lan Dian! – he exclaimed, announcing not only his position as a member of the council, but also his new military rank. Now he was just below the two Colonels and the General, who were also his fellow counselors. – I would like you to congratulate the new Counselor, but let’s not forget about the Major Komatsu, another super saiyan of the Alliance! – he roared with pride, announcing the promotion of his younger brother from Captain to Major. – You’ve also witnessed now most of our power! Standing before you are most of the super saiyans of the Alliance! But this is not all! We also have Sargent Leena, who is currently on Earth! In short, it means we have SIX super saiyans now! Making us the strongest force in the whole universe! – and when he announced that, the crowd went crazy with pride and excitement, and Nasu began to chuckle! His parents legacy was recovering its influence and status.
It wasn’t as strong as when Natto and Tomoroko were alive, but that was only because they had reached the pinnacle of a saiyan power, but at the same time, the Alliance was better now, because the power wasn’t concentrated in the hands of two individuals. No, they now had six super elites, a number no one else had in the whole seventh universe. And that made Nasu overjoyed and he couldn’t even hide it. It was about time to start setting things into motion.
WC: 1,255
Total: 5,849
From this point onwards Jie Shan Lan Dian is Counselor for the Saiyan Alliance
Post by King of All on Mar 21, 2016 19:17:46 GMT -5
Komatsu's aura was raging around him like a wild fire. He took a slow step closer to Jie Shan but never made it farther then that as Nasu flew down behind him, skillfully knocking the back of his neck. His golden aura died out as his hair returned to black instantly as Komatsu fell forward once more, face planting on the ground with a dull thud. His head was still bleeding quite profusely and now that he wasn't moving, you could easily tell were some of the broken bones were.
Kyuri swooped in behind the three Super Saiyans, landing next to the now immobile Komatsu. She would reach into one of the pouches around her belt and retrieve a needle. She wasted no time in sticking it into the bulk of the boy's neck. She would then reach into a second pouch and quickly retreive gauze that she would then quickly wrap around his head to try and stem the bleeding. With that done, she would carefully turn Komatsu onto his back, picking him up as she glanced to Nasu as he informed both Jie, and the crowd of his win.
She would then look over towards Jie Shan and smirk.
"Congrats kiddo. That was a hell of a fight! Don't worry about Koma, he'll be fine. Looking forward to seeing you around the Council." She said with a smile towards the new Super Saiyan Councilor. She would take off at high speeds so that she ould get Komatsu to a medical chamber.
------------------ WC: 253 Total WC: 3,269
Thread Exit - PL please! Lots of fun ^^ Congrats Jie!
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Post by Jie Shan Lan Dian on Mar 21, 2016 21:48:24 GMT -5
Jie Shan watched as the crowd of Super Saiyans flooded the arena, intervening. Well, he thought, thank whatever gods there were for that. He'd have hated to have to press the boy even further. With a sigh, Jie Shan sheathed his blade as Miso suggested and began the slow descent back to the arena floor. Soon enough he landed and stepped closer to the group of Super Saiyans. He stood silently by as the Overseer gave his little speech, trying to look as stoic as he possibly could.
On the inside, his entire body was alight with emotions, a hurricane of emotions. The rage of the Super Saiyan transformation was still floating in the back of his mind. His muscles twitched with power. He could get used to this feeling. It felt right, natural.
Not only that, but there was also a feeling of pride and joy flowing through him. He'd done it. He had become a counselor of the Saiyan Alliance. Not the turn he thought his story might take, but he was glad that it happened. And perhaps, more importantly, he had become a Super Saiyan. A few years past, the halfblood might never have thought he'd become a Super Saiyan. Hell, he'd never even considered becoming one of the legendary warriors. But he'd done it. Today was a day of success for the halfblood.
He turned his gaze back on the now unconscious Saiyan, Komatsu. A strong kid, he thought. Almost as strong as Jie Shan himself. Hell, he reminded himself, probably stronger with that Super Saiyan transformation. He'd forced a lot more power out of it at the end... Jie Shan wondered if he could manage that. He shrugged it off. There'd be time for that later.
He turned his gaze on Kyuri, and shot her a grin. "Thanks," he said, truly grateful, "I hope I didn't rough Komatsu up too badly."
Jie Shan turned his gaze back on the crowd. They were cheering... For him, for the Alliance. He held up his hands and waved to the crowd and even gave a small, flourishing bow. Cocky? Yes? Arrogant? Maybe so. But damn, he thought, it it didn't feel good. A wide, chesire smile crossed his face. This was the beginning of something great for him.
He turned his gaze back to his fellow leadership. "Well all," Jie Shan said, "I look forward to working with you all. For the Alliance!"
A new tomorrow, he thought, a golden tomorrow.
Exit post! I'd like PL with LMB and half-Elemi bonus!
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E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
It was over, it was finally over. Nasu had successfully knocked Komatsu unconscious with his karate chop to his neck and his brother’s golden hair returned to its base black color and his aura completely vanished as his body plummeted to the ground, just like a marionette of which the strings had been cut in a single swing. Komatsu had fought bravely, had fought well, but he was up against a more experienced and powerful opponent, there wasn’t much he could do and Nasu knew that his younger brother did his best, and that was precisely why he had promoted him to Major. Karota didn’t like the promotion all that much as she stared at him with judging eyes; the saiyaness had a bad experience with Komatsu’s inexperience and immaturity just a day ago and to see him getting promoted just because he went super saiyan bothered her, but she couldn’t just reprehend Nasu and show her bitterness of that in public after such an announcement. Nasu knew it too and that was precisely why he announced it like that: so no one from the council could actually complain or have a saying in that. It wasn’t the most democratic thing to do, but, still, he thought his brother was worth it, and that was enough for him.
Kyuri was hasty to make sure Komatsu would be stable and that was why Nasu didn’t care much about sending a medical team immediately. Their grandmother picked him up and put him and stared at both Nasu and Jie Shan, and a little after that she complimented the new Lieutenant Colonel of the Saiyan Alliance for his victory, saying it was a hell of fight. Miso laughed out loud and nodded his head on top of his massive body. – A freaking hell of fight! And now I’m a freaking rich man! Heh! – he said, overjoyed with the fact that he had just earned a bunch load of money in that gamble that seemed almost doomed a few minutes ago.
Jie Shan answered Kyuri hoping Komatsu wasn’t all that injured. – The brat will be fine! Nothing a healing tank and a day or two won’t cure! Heh! – Miso said as he slowly reverted to a base super saiyan form, and then to his base form again, as his hair and eyes became black. Karota was the second to power down as there was no need for her to maintain the super saiyan state any longer. The only one who didn’t revert back to base was Nasu that was completely used to the super saiyan form that it didn’t cause any strains on his body. He stared at Jie Shan with a small grin on the corner of his mouth. – Welcome to the council. Take the rest of the day off, Lieutenant Colonel. You should recover from this fight and from the stresses of the transformation. I will be seeing you tomorrow so that we can end your training in the Soy School. – Nasu said, before walking towards Karota. – Don’t worry, we will finish our training first. It will be good for them if I’m sort of drained. – he said in a serious tone. Karota, on the other hand, giggled a bit, folding her arms as she stared at the young Overseer. – You offend me, making it sound like you will still be standing after I’m done with you! Hihi! – and Nasu chuckled at her words. – We will see. – he limited himself to answer.
After that, the crowd began to leave the arena. They were still thrilled with the fierce fight between the former captains and their confidence in the Saiyan Alliance grew a lot with this absurd display of power. Super Saiyans had that effect on people’s morale, and they really needed it after the deaths of Natto and Tomoroko, and the rule of the wicked Etorin that, although short lived, was around enough to shaken the belief of some saiyans in the future of the Alliance, a belief that was slowly beginning to recover.
Mastered Forms: Super Saiyan [x16], Super Saiyan 2 [x32], Super Saiyan 3 [x46]
Mastered God Forms: Super Saiyan God [x56], Super Saiyan Blue [x60]
Afterlife: Makaioken [x2-x10]
Advanced Scouter (Red), Perfect Medical Machine,
Training Dojo, Martial Arts School,
Palace of the King (Estate 75%)
Planet Yasai
Mothership (Star Javelin) +x2 Cargo Bay Adjustment
E.S. (Heaven's Arrow) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
E.S. (Brave Vesperia) +x2 Cargo Bay + Stealth
King of All you've gained 11,180 PL. Now your total PL is 160,231! You've acquired Super Saiyan Second Grade [x14] and also unlocked Super Saiyan Third Grade and Super Saiyan Full Power for training!
Jie Shan Lan Dian you've gained 4,435 PL. Now your total PL is 155,696! You've unlocked all regular super saiyan forms for training!
@hero you've gained 4,000 PL. Now your total PL is 18,994!
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